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My Love Awaits

By nocturnal night and daring day In faithful forests my love does lay By candle light and fading gray In faithful forests where branches sway By crimson moon and daunting dawn In faithful forests a yielding yawn By the lazy loon and fragile fawn In faithful forests our love will spawn Where rivers flow and meadows still My love awaits amid the daffodil Where the snow leaves a bitter chill My love awaits with a frosted will Where the sun slowly sets... and bids adieu My love awaits to start anew Where all is done... with no regrets My love awaits for only you. July.30.2017 Lost love 2017 Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Maria Williams

Date: 9/21/2017 7:08:00 AM

What a lovely write WW, and congrats on your placement...Maria

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/23/2017 12:11:00 PM

Superb poem, I m in love with this one, how beautifully you ve expressed yourself, the imaginations, the feelings all were great, it clearly show the love you have for that person that you re providing different scenarios that no matter what happens, I ll still wait for you, superb poem

Afzal Nusker

Date: 8/11/2017 11:52:00 AM

The flow in your rhyme seems so effortless. Outstanding write, W.W. Congratulations!

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/7/2017 11:08:00 AM

This is really heart wrenching. Congrats! :) Sunita

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/5/2017 11:23:00 PM

Wonderfully beautiful writing, W2, and an exquisite flow of rhyme and meter! Love this one, and it is a well-deserved winner - congrats, my friend! :-)

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/6/2017 11:07:00 PM

Thank you so much Greg...god bless...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/5/2017 4:05:00 PM

Hi WW, back again to say Congrats on this amazing write. I truly enjoyed reading it again!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/6/2017 11:07:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Susan...god bless...^WW^

Carol B.

Date: 8/4/2017 7:22:00 PM

Winged Warrior, This is such a romantic rhyme. As well I feel this is far superior than the romance cards sold at hallmark. Beautiful!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/6/2017 11:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Carol...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/4/2017 3:22:00 PM

Lovely imagery in this one WW! Congratulations on your placement! : )

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/6/2017 11:05:00 PM

Thank you, my dear Connie...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton

Date: 8/4/2017 12:27:00 PM

Wonderful write WW, you made it!!! in my premium contest, these are so hard to judge, I spend so much time, I want to put 20 into a 10 slot space, glad you made it with this excellent Rhyme, congrats on a fine placement!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/4/2017 12:34:00 PM

Thank you, John...I could only imagine how hard they are to judge my friend...so don't worry, just try your best...one day I'll give a crack at it...problem is everyone for me would be in first place lol...^WW^

White Wolf

Date: 7/31/2017 10:55:00 AM

Simply stunning, WW! Best of luck to you, John!

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 12:23:00 PM

Thank you Wolfie...have a great day my friend...^WW^

Eve Roper

Date: 7/31/2017 9:29:00 AM

wonderful write, ^WW^, I love that you used the monorhyme for each stanza.. makes it flow in rhythm. Great theme for the contest... good luck ,,, a winner already ~*

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 12:19:00 PM

Thank you Eve...have a beautiful day...^WW^

Joseph May

Date: 7/31/2017 8:21:00 AM

This is beautiful WW... love the lyrical flow...best wishes

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, my friend...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/31/2017 6:37:00 AM

Excellent Rhyming poem WW. Good luck in the contest. I hope it does well ! :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Heidi...have a great and beautiful day...^WW^

Silent One

Date: 7/31/2017 5:53:00 AM

Ooh... What a beautiful voice.. This is a beautiful poem WW, rhymes and flows so well... Good monorhyme.. until the last four lines.. lol

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 6:44:00 AM

Thank you, my Silent friend...trying something different, leave me alone lol...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/31/2017 5:42:00 AM

Oh how you fill the heart with the yearning of love dearest WW! Such a tender and loving poem accompanied by passionate music! Good luck my friend!

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 6:43:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios...have a great day my friend...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/30/2017 10:50:00 PM

WW, This poems slays me! Absolutely beautiful, lovely rhythm and rhyme. Love your style :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 6:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan...appreciate your visit...god bless...^WW^

Katheryn Moore

Date: 7/30/2017 10:37:00 PM

Impressive

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 6:40:00 AM

Thank you, my friend...god bless...^WW^

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/30/2017 10:34:00 PM

This is a lovely and invigorating write WW! I truly loved reading this glorious poem by your harmonious pen this evening! You have enthralled me by your grandiose piece here! Great Work!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Russell...your words are well appreciated, my friend...^WW^

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/30/2017 10:21:00 PM

You've got a rhythm in your lines that are really nice and the words fit perfectly...Good one...Thanks for sharing...Good night

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2017 6:37:00 AM

Thank you Arturo...god bless...^WW^