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My Life Is Hash

I love a man who’s rash and who carries lots of cash. If he has a little flash that only adds to his panache. I dug into my stash to provide a birthday bash for my caballero with his sash who really made a splash. My dreams have turned to ash when my lover made a dash and took off with my antique Nash. My heart can’t survive the gash.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/29/2011 6:33:00 PM
Well done. Monorhyme can be challenging and yours flows so well. take care Lee
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:53:00 PM
way to do the contest, JOyce. Great monorhyme, sweetie.
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:25:00 PM
oh no....funny!
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:10:00 PM
Good one..I got a chuckle..Must be another contest..This is the third one that I have read..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 8/28/2011 5:15:00 PM
Wonderfully witty write, Joyce! So much fun to read. My crystal ball sees a big win in your future. Amazing use of the monorhyme form -- love the panache! And it will surely remind some women of men they have loved in the past. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2011 4:27:00 PM
the moral of this story is... "never fall for a man whose rash might gash you!" Fun write, Joyce, thanks! ~N
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Date: 8/28/2011 4:15:00 PM
Very good write Joyce....smiles alll around... Michael
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Date: 8/28/2011 3:54:00 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest, Joyce
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Date: 8/28/2011 3:36:00 PM
too cute, my parents had a Nash when I was a child, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/28/2011 3:31:00 PM
Love it Joyce! I had a '59 pink Rambler for years-just sold it two months ago since I moved-I miss it already :(
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