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My heart is a pomegranate glistening from outside bleeding from wounds within My mind is a watermelon calm outside pricking from inside every seed intact still hurting My body is like a coconut hard from outside but soft inside, inner core filled with tears of all physical and mental aches Sometimes I prick like a pineapple to protect inner self But mostly I allow people to treat me like a sugar cane and endure it all silently My constant companions are my hidden grape tears which make their presence every time I cry or laugh. Both green and purple remind me I am not alone be it sorrow or joy. If I bare out all my pains and sufferings I will shed tears like an orange cut into miniscule pieces. I never refresh my wounds, they are past and of no value to me like a seed thrown away after eating a fruit. I speak only about my joys so that I see a smile like cut kiwi radiating laughter all around. Date: 12/4/2020

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Date: 12/12/2020 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations Rama on your win!!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/12/2020 7:18:00 AM
Thanks and same to you. Take care, Rama
Date: 12/11/2020 2:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Rama :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/11/2020 5:13:00 AM
Thanks and same to you too. Hugs Rama
Date: 12/10/2020 9:38:00 AM
I like the use of metaphors here as fruit, a clever poem,.. you wrote it very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. I would say a mango is happier, lol
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/11/2020 3:11:00 AM
Mango is happier but it doesn't have rays like sun radiating joy all around, so kiwi. You wrote"use words in a different way to describe certain things," so this write. As usual wasn't sure of placement until it happened. Thanks for contest and placement. How about a contest on detachment in attachments. Toughest task indeed... Enjoy your day. Take care, Rama

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