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My Last Poem -of 2012-

The last poem…

Standing against the wall. 
The longest teardrop made its fall. 
Making one final call.
Never will I write about my letters again.

This prison is my pen.
*INK* My enemy~ at the same times my only friend.
*INK* My guardian~ the escort of words into my desires. 
This pen is my prison.

No longer will I let it defend and comfort me.
No longer will I let it sit there and take control of my imagery.
No longer will I share it with you...
These visions have been the birth and death to what is reality.
I have no reason to lie; it is time to set my thoughts free.
And say goodbye…………. 

As I walk alone to the open skies of 2013.

~~The End~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/17/2014 2:05:00 PM
I sought this out, mainly because for one who is in the midst of learning meter, starting with iambic tetrameter, pentameter and mixed meter, there is this sense of direction where one (me) has to be perfect with this or the poem is not going to work. I left the life of perfectionism long ago, but some vestiges have reared its ugly head. In reading yours (and some I did not comment on) I have found a whole new genre of prosody that does not require perfection.
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Date: 11/17/2014 2:05:00 PM
I liked the concept of going back to 2012, -- am well initiated in time travel, so this was a good moment. Thanks, Thomas
Date: 9/8/2014 1:08:00 AM
that was a while back...
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Date: 5/6/2014 9:28:00 PM
A demarcation line, another year is labled in this scintillating poem. A message fervently told with gifted depth and originality. YF, Gene Bourne.
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Date: 1/15/2014 4:35:00 AM
I have no reason to lie, it's a wonderful farewell poem of old year just as the other timedrop....
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:13:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/10/2013 10:56:00 PM
I was getting worried you were serious... that you weren't writing anymore. Glad I was wrong. I loved the ending line, it seemed very hopeful and full of possibilities. Though it is sad you are walking alone...
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Date: 4/19/2013 3:30:00 AM
Yes to this pen catcher... Beautiful, unique and soft.... Bravo~A.O
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Date: 4/4/2013 10:13:00 PM
It moves the mind through the images and its a common plain for poets. Thank you; michael
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Date: 3/23/2013 1:58:00 PM
just want to say I re-sent your card last week I think-- sorry I missed the shower, but I am sure you had a blast!
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Date: 3/1/2013 1:10:00 PM
you never walk alone!
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Date: 2/25/2013 12:09:00 AM
that was some poem girl. hella clean write. i love it. showed allot of emotion and letting go.
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Date: 2/24/2013 5:30:00 PM
PD, how are you today? Just stopping by to say hi. Trying to see my friends that are not on here today.
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Date: 2/23/2013 2:02:00 PM
And you continue to be so creative in 2013. What a powerful way to end 2012! Looking forward to all of your poetry in 2013 and what your last poem of 2013 will be about! - Gail
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:36:00 PM
!!!
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Date: 2/12/2013 4:28:00 AM
Lovely write, Linda! You are so adept at expressing yourself through words. Thoroughly enjoyed this! Hugs!
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Date: 2/8/2013 4:42:00 PM
dont know if I comented on this already but such a cool wriet again love it as do alot of your writes glad its not completly your last write xxx davidscott
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Date: 2/6/2013 5:07:00 PM
Best of the best here is what I think P.D. One of my favoritest poets you are. Love to you always my friend, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:25:00 PM
Dynamite poem! But so sad. Jack
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Date: 2/2/2013 7:22:00 PM
without visions I would be nothing, you left 2012 in a bang, and I am sure you're make fireworks in 2013,,especially Pd you are firework for sure,,,and Thank you ever so much for all the readings of my words and especially for leaving your sweet converstaions behind,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:47:00 AM
Through visions poets feel the reality and at that time thoughts are set free with ink on paper and says goodbye. How excellent the vision is, loved always my friend, bl
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Date: 1/28/2013 7:02:00 PM
Hey there button girl. How are you?
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Date: 1/28/2013 5:10:00 AM
Nice change up on the name ;) Keep em guessing lol
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Date: 1/26/2013 10:36:00 AM
Letting things go, not easy to do. Not giving the controll, makes for a stronger you. Setting yourself free, so that you can be, is the way. This, for you, I will pray. B.J. "A" 2
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Date: 1/23/2013 12:01:00 AM
is this really your last poem or should we expect more
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Date: 1/22/2013 10:31:00 PM
Thanks for your kind compliment to my poem. Sure this is your last poem for 2012 and we could not wait any longer for your 2013 poems, PD. (^_^).
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