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My Inner Voice

"The highest realms of thoughts are impossible to reach, without first attaining an understanding of compassion." Quote _Socrates __________________________________ My goal in life is finding bliss, serenity and peace . . . comply with morals and my inner voice, cry if I must, then with ease of pen- write a masterpiece; die a thousand deaths until I again rejoice ! Time guides me to distant infinite variant places . . . sublime is my gladness for ease of mind, rhyme a verse harmonious with sweet attainment traces; chime songs where looming emotions have twined ! Orientation to my true north my forever goal . . . ruination if I listen to divergent thoughts, elation my great pleasure for finding my soul; damnation when my conscious is in twisted knots ! Fulfilled in my soul with this divine harmony gift . . . thrilled with the contentment I can express, chilled, I send my written words and poem far adrift; build bridges for friends that God will bless ! ___________________ February 26, 2021 Poetry/Double Lento/My Inner Voice Copyright Protected, ID 02-1332-570-26 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Inner Alignment sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 03/20/2021 Fifth Place

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Date: 3/22/2021 9:53:00 AM
Constance, what a beautiful expression of "divine harmony" - a lifelong goal and desired place to reside. This Lento is wonderfully composed. Congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/23/2021 10:53:00 PM
Sam, thank your for the compliment and comment and congratulations on my poem, appreciate so much _Constance
Date: 3/20/2021 11:29:00 PM
Compassion is a key ingredient to a blessed life......Congrats on your win Constance :)
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Date: 3/21/2021 12:37:00 PM
Carol, thanks for the congrats and for sure without compassion we are empty vessels _Constance
Date: 3/20/2021 8:10:00 PM
Thank you for participating in the contest, Constance. Congratulations on your winning write, which resonates deep within. God bless
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Date: 3/21/2021 12:38:00 PM
Seeker, thank you for the contest inspiration and for my placement, and for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
Date: 3/11/2021 12:22:00 PM
lovely write - I must try this form too. Hope you are both well xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2021 4:14:00 PM
Jack, thanks for the lovely, yes I wanted to try this form and really like it, these two verses are a Lento, you can write 4 verse and that is a Double lento's, triple lentos is 6 verses and chain lentos are 8 verses _Constance
Date: 2/28/2021 3:57:00 AM
Highly skilled application of this poetic format that has resulted in a beautiful, thoughtful, autobiographical master-work. Very well done, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/28/2021 2:32:00 PM
Geoffrey, thank you for visiting my poem and for the wonderful compliment and comment, grateful _Constance
Date: 2/27/2021 4:41:00 AM
I love the new verses, Constance. Once you are filled with divine harmony, you feel empowered. Love the thought of building bridges (instead of walls) to stay connected with those we've lost. An awesome poem for my faves! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 2/27/2021 8:49:00 AM
Carolyn, thanks for coming back to read the completed poem and for the compliment and for FAV, appreciate a lot _Constance
Date: 2/27/2021 3:58:00 AM
lovely. I enjoyed. God bless you sweet lady... God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 2/27/2021 8:49:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the compliment and the visit, love _Constance
Date: 2/26/2021 2:32:00 PM
Captivating, Constance! If you add more verses, let me know. It seems we can't do wrong in life if we have moral behavior and listen to that "inner voice." Excellent writing! Sure to get a big win. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2021 2:56:00 PM
Carolyn, thank for the compliment on my poem, I have one more verse to add and will let you know when done _Constance

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