My Heart, My Heart

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Oh, my heart, my heart I bring my heart to you love on this rainy day where the wind takes my hair as I walk among the rows the quiet rows of headstones our destiny decided above there was no time for us written our love but a moment in time and then our dreams died we thought we had forever tears is all I have to give you and my heart, my heart is yours and if I fall along the way in this life, will you take my hand will you carry me in your wings I know you dwell above where the bluebirds sing and if I am lost along the way will you lift me up and carry me we thought we had forever . . . ______________________ March 31, 2023 Poetry/Free verse/my heart, my heart Copyright Protected, ID 03-1536-409-31 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/31/2023 7:10:00 PM

You had me in tears, Constance. So touching and beautiful. Be strong dear one. Hugs ~ Fin

Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2023 6:19:00 AM

Fin, thank you so much for the lovely comment on my poem, it has been difficult to accept but I am a survivor, hugs!

Ann Peck

Date: 3/31/2023 4:46:00 PM

Oh, Constance, your poem brought tears. We do think we have forever, but it goes so quickly, so many things left unsaid. I think your love watches over you--it's just the way I believe.

Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2023 6:21:00 AM

Ann, thank you so much for the lovely comment, I believe like you, I still feel his soul and spirit all around me and that brings me peace and I know he watches over me !

Jenna Logan

Date: 3/31/2023 2:14:00 PM

You will fall time and again, Constance. We all do, but with faith we know we'll have help so we can stand again. Lovely writing.

Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2023 6:25:00 AM

Jenna, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment. You are so right each time I fall, I find that fire burning inside, a strength that makes me stand tall though my heart is broken !