My Heart Is Set

My heart is set in love for thee
I sha'nt be satisfied
Until thou come along with me
The swells of life to ride

My heart is set upon thy face
So lovely, so sublime
Could I but drink thy charming grace
'Twould end my earthly time

My heart is fixed on that of thee
I find it ever true
I would thy servant gladly be
If serve I could for you

My heart is fixed upon thy voice
With silver tones and clear
To hear it oft would be my choice
Throughout my ev'ry year

My heart is set upon thy smile
Upon thy sparkling eyes
For thee I'd walk the extra mile
And comfort all thy sighs

In all, my heart is wholly placed
Within thy tender hands
To hold or break as well thou say'st
Upon life's shifting sands


 

 ~ 8.6.8.6 metre- ABAB rhyme- Iambic rhythm ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/22/2013 6:39:00 PM
Nice! Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:12:00 PM
I remember loving this one the first time I saw it. Congrats, a well deserved win.
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Date: 2/22/2013 2:06:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2013 7:46:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:16:00 PM
Hi Isaiah, Congratulations with your THEES and Thous, :-)..always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2013 4:49:00 PM
And you were so kind to help me with mine!! Look here at this beauty...and taking the form of Quatrain, makes it even more stunning! Well done, Isaiah!! A wonderful job!
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Date: 2/21/2013 12:08:00 PM
A well woven poem of love...from the heart !! Congrats on your win !
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Date: 2/11/2013 5:18:00 AM
Lovely romantic write!
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Date: 2/7/2013 2:07:00 PM
Ahhh!! So romantic..Enjoyed reading on a rainy afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..My dream about hell has made me feel that the news needs to be out so that people can make their decision given the knowledge that Hell exist..Sara
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Date: 2/6/2013 3:18:00 PM
wow, a romantic one. It would fit very nicely into one of the valentine contests! You used some inversions of words that made it sound very classical too.
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:24:00 AM
Ah! Excellent work here, Isaiah! Romantic and beautiful with carefully chosen words. Thoroughly enjoyed! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:39:00 AM
First..I'm glad you enjoyed my "A Penny for your Crumbs, Sir" poem. Thanks for your lovely comment. Love the old feel to this as well as the tenderness of heartfelt words. Well penned !!
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Date: 2/2/2013 12:22:00 PM
Glad that you stopped by so that I could discover this wonderful work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks again for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2013 1:56:00 PM
Isalah a great Quatrain, romance flowed from your poem. Good luck in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/29/2013 11:15:00 AM
Nicely done!!!! Can you please read my poem thanks
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:01:00 AM
So romantic... such a flowing and beautiful piece. I'm putting it with my favorites.
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Date: 1/28/2013 2:24:00 PM
awesome flow, to this wonderful poem...
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Date: 1/27/2013 4:33:00 PM
This is brilliant! I can't get over how easily you adopt the voice of an Old English poet. I assume this is for the "thees and thous" contest - so good luck, although I'm sure you won't need it!
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Date: 1/25/2013 10:51:00 AM
Bravo, my friend! You have penned an exquisite romantic poem. Beautifully written, Isaiah! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/25/2013 4:14:00 AM
Hi Isaiah.I loved each stanza of this quatrain especially the fifth stanza.So very romantico..Thy words flow beautifully here..Bravo:)
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