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My Grandmother's Vases

Grandmother kept two large vases high on a mantle On the front of each was a colonial scene of quality It was not until we were clearing out her effects That we discovered the beautiful vases were cracked; In fact, the backs were largely gone, only the façade Remained--an illusion for all of her parlor guests. I loved those vases so; I had no idea they were broken, Nobody wanted them, so I kept them for myself In my living room. Yes, they were imperfect, flawed, And had no value whatsoever to anyone except me They became symbolic of the mask we often see Others wearing, hiding their ugly, torn personality. FIRST PLACE WINNER Written June 13, 2021 For "Writing Prompt - Flawed" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 6/25/2021 4:45:00 PM
Milt, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your excellent poem. Great use of the required words. I found you poem very emotional and it touched my heart, peace _ Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/25/2021 5:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. I enjoyed the contest and was glad that my poem was well-received. Peace to you!
Date: 6/24/2021 8:37:00 PM
Such Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/24/2021 9:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Christuraj. You are very kind.
Date: 6/14/2021 5:33:00 AM
"I loved those vases so; I had no idea they were broken,: This is well described; I like them myself now.
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Date: 6/14/2021 9:10:00 AM
Actually, they burned up in the fire that destroyed my grandmother's home when she was in her late eighties. Overheated warm morning stove in her bedroom. She got out safely, but lost everything. Another time; another poem.
Date: 6/13/2021 2:02:00 PM
Wow. Such a Narration!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/13/2021 7:10:00 PM
Thanks, Chris. It's a true story. Unfortunately, those vases got burned up in a house fire, so I don't have them now.

Book: Shattered Sighs