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My Friend This Is the End

Many intimates might collapse, we realize, And direct us to strive solely in this place, There's nearly a ray of hope in the eagle's eyes, To shed the ode's tear without further grace. We say he imparted when we survey his space, Some are eager, friends return as we eulogize, Angels beset him and herald his embrace, Many intimates might collapse, we realize. Adversity is forlorn, no matter how time flies, A gone friend feels like a limb misplace, Assigning a friend's loss bond ethical mates, And direct us to strive solely in this place. Our chums are silent, yet they've left men race, They went one step down a path we will equalize, Enjoying a friend may no more provide solace, There's nearly a ray of hope in the eagle's eyes. Sadness confines us with infinity-long ties, Some folk enters our life forbear a long trace, Of our feelings, causing irreversibly applies, To shed the ode's tear without further grace. We can't stop preferring a friend since he dies, Notably, if he's worthier than anyone, you notice, Splitting from living pals, anguish amplifies, When relished life fully and truly, fate may glance.
Written: June 7, 2022
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Baker Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 4:10 PM
Deep passionate poem written in this difficult form. You have conveyed the impact close friends can have on the life of their friends. Thank you for sharing from your heart and soul, Lasaad. Your voice resonates with my soul through your poetry my friend. Bill
Foster Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 12:07 PM
I enjoyed the flow of this writing. It held me the whole way, twice. Imagery, and excellence. Ann
Trifiatis Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Beautifully written poem with profound thoughts and strong emotions, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Much liked it! Blessings!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 7:37 AM
This is a form I know nothing about and in my state of mind I can only go to free verse. None-the less emotion is defined at its highest level. Enjoyed.
Pandit Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 5:17 AM
You are at ease writing this form, my friend. Well articulated emotive feelings in this poignant write, Lasaad.
George Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 9:08 PM
Our dear friends, when they part from life, leave a vacuum behind. It is when we begin relishing life with them that fate intervenes. All through life, we see intimate ones collapsing and being removed from our lives for ever ! A great poem on friends and their eternal departure...
Kyser Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 8:29 PM
So I think you left off the opening phrase as the last line. I enjoyed the poem
Poet Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 3:55 AM
I'm happy you enjoy it, Jeff. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. kindest regards
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