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My Free Spirit

I am like a free spirit. My soul twists and tangles like the wind weaving through an endless meadow. It gallops across the never ending memories of my fate. My spirit rumbles strong as thunder rolling in a storm-filled night. It leaps into the air alongside the flopping fish going upstream. And through a rainbow, with its colorful spectrum of dazzling light. My wild spirit bounces off the walls of my imagination. The words scrambling on a page like a sugar rush. My free spirit allows me to transform anything into something beautiful, breathtaking, awe inspiring. I am free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/19/2011 11:44:00 AM
Simply worded and easy to read. This writing conveys vivid descriptiveness rather easily.
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:25:00 PM
Ps. Smile ~ "Ow, & I Am Very Glad That 'Your Beauties Spirit' Has Found Itself 'Flying Sooo Free, My Dear;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:22:00 PM
Smile ~ "Your Beauty," made myself giggle with this sweeet painting my dear and I Am not sure if amid part this was "Your Treasures" true intent for the readers but either or I love the full array of splendid colours throughout this lovely verse my dear ~ 'flopping fish; bouncing off walls and sugar rush' were so, well, made my heart within a wonderful way ~ "Love, 'Always,' John!:) ~
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