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My Five Senses

When I write I use my every bit of skill these fingers they have loved, cajoled fed and bathed babies,... elders too they were made for typing words anew; When I write I use my eyes to see the things that need to be reviewed the pulse of a wing upon a blue heron the shift of a leaf on a tree or a flower When I write I hear the world around me sometimes muffled by the noise and rush sometimes quiet as a homely mute sometimes I can hark, a pin drop.... When I write I can smell the coffee from my favorite writing nook by a distance I can inhale the roast that shakes the beanie undernote When I write I can taste the empathy of a broken dream on celophane sheet of a titan in his glory, onward victory! or a dying victim after a sudden crash When I write, I am the sharpened sword When I write, I give myself up to the word I can feel, hear, smell, see and devour When I write, I feel the creative power inside, when I write.... July 24, 2018

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Date: 8/21/2018 3:19:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/16/2018 10:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done!
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Date: 8/15/2018 7:46:00 PM
The 'senses' of a true poet, Pixie Dust. Love how you addressed the theme. Congratulations on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/15/2018 9:42:00 AM
Back with congrats on your top win, Pixie.
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:10:00 PM
A poet's poem Pixie....attention to detail expands the poet's words into something special. Congratulations on your lovely entry being in the top three. Very deserving of the honor! : )
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Date: 8/14/2018 12:16:00 PM
Could not have said this better myself. You are a true writer, feeling and sensing everything. Beautiful. Congrats Pixie!
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:17:00 AM
I could identify with your words so much, that I could see many things we might have in common !! That is the beauty of a true poet! I'm in awe ! Congrats on your win, Pixie Dust !!
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Date: 8/14/2018 9:01:00 AM
You sense the world around you, mulling it over and deliver poetic marvels! Congrats Pixie!
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Date: 7/25/2018 10:43:00 AM
When you write you're also freed...A write of wisdom...Nice Pixie
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Date: 7/24/2018 9:24:00 PM
We all enjoy inspiration but it takes dedication to actually take pen to hand and write it down (or type it). Just imagine all the great poets of the past now without pen or hand to jot down the words tumbling through their thoughts - as well as those who thought THE perfect poem but never wrote it down, and you will find what an incredibly lucky girl you are to have the skill and to find the time! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/24/2018 6:38:00 PM
When you write, you are........a grand poet!
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Date: 7/24/2018 5:58:00 PM
Hello Pixie Dust, my ideas come to me in a dream. Or i could be reading an idea comes,idea comes to me from no where. I always get my ideas to create a poem. it is nice to meet you. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 7/24/2018 5:16:00 PM
A powerful write, Pixie. Your passion for writing comes through..with intensity.
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