My Five Senses

When I write I use my every bit of skill 
these fingers they have loved, cajoled 
fed and bathed babies,... elders too 
they were made for typing words anew; 

When I write I use my eyes to see 
the things that need to be reviewed
the pulse of a wing upon a blue heron 
the shift of a leaf on a tree or a flower 

When I write I hear the world around me 
sometimes muffled by the noise and rush 
sometimes quiet as a homely mute  
sometimes I can hark, a pin drop....

When I write I can smell the coffee 
from my favorite writing nook 
by a distance I  can inhale the roast  
that shakes the beanie undernote

When I write I can taste the empathy 
of a broken dream on celophane sheet 
of a titan in his glory, onward victory!
or a dying victim after a sudden crash

When I write, I am the sharpened sword 
When I write, I give myself up to the word 
I can feel, hear, smell, see and devour 
When I write, I feel the creative power
inside,  
                     when I write....

July 24, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
Gentry Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done!
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 7:46 PM
The 'senses' of a true poet, Pixie Dust. Love how you addressed the theme. Congratulations on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Back with congrats on your top win, Pixie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 4:10 PM
A poet's poem Pixie....attention to detail expands the poet's words into something special. Congratulations on your lovely entry being in the top three. Very deserving of the honor! : )
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Could not have said this better myself. You are a true writer, feeling and sensing everything. Beautiful. Congrats Pixie!
Richards Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:17 AM
I could identify with your words so much, that I could see many things we might have in common !! That is the beauty of a true poet! I'm in awe ! Congrats on your win, Pixie Dust !!
Michael Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 10:43 AM
When you write you're also freed...A write of wisdom...Nice Pixie
Leffanta Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 9:24 PM
We all enjoy inspiration but it takes dedication to actually take pen to hand and write it down (or type it). Just imagine all the great poets of the past now without pen or hand to jot down the words tumbling through their thoughts - as well as those who thought THE perfect poem but never wrote it down, and you will find what an incredibly lucky girl you are to have the skill and to find the time! Aloha! Rico
Wanter Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 6:38 PM
When you write, you are........a grand poet!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:58 PM
Hello Pixie Dust, my ideas come to me in a dream. Or i could be reading an idea comes,idea comes to me from no where. I always get my ideas to create a poem. it is nice to meet you. have a nice evening my friend.
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:16 PM
A powerful write, Pixie. Your passion for writing comes through..with intensity.
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