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My mum constantly reminds me of this rhyme I came out with when I was about 7 so I had to share

Durin' the time I was passing my urine My faeces were falling to pieces Submitted to Juvenilia Contest 13th March 2015

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Lin Lane

Date: 5/25/2017 12:19:00 PM

HAHA oh yes, Jan... you've been a poopie butt since you were seven.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/19/2015 12:15:00 PM

By the way like you when I was seven I was already thirteen years old!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2015 3:56:00 PM

age is but a number my dear friend lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/19/2015 12:13:00 PM

I love it! A Fav!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2015 3:55:00 PM

Thanks Armand:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/16/2015 8:34:00 PM

Yes I had to come back and see this one again!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2015 2:15:00 AM

Aww thanks my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/15/2015 6:50:00 AM

Lol. Keep 'em coming Jan:-)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2015 8:26:00 AM

Thanks Njeri:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 3/15/2015 1:51:00 AM

Hi little Jan, I am glad your humour stays with you always it is a true strength. Love your friend Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2015 5:56:00 AM

Thanks Shane:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2015 1:34:00 PM

:D This is so funny, Jan! I just love it "to pieces." Always a seven for you! Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 1:48:00 PM

LOL :-) Thanks Carolyn:-) Hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/14/2015 9:57:00 AM

A funny poem written beautifully by remembering the past, my lovey friend. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 10:39:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by again BL:-) Hugs jan xx

Jason Barth

Date: 3/14/2015 8:42:00 AM

Great one almost like one my home boy wrote when we younger but can't recite kinda vulger n some words shouldn't be said

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by jason:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 3/14/2015 5:47:00 AM

Jan, cute one, nice to see your first writings . . . my first poems were all about death and sadness that says a lot of why I write the way I do, and thanks for visiting my poetry today . . .

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 7:32:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment - I didn't start writing until 2013 when my hubby got cancer and posted here in Feb 2014 - who know where I could have been if I had started writing sooner lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/14/2015 3:11:00 AM

Are you allowed to verse poop on Poetry soup? Jolly little verse, Jan. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 7:30:00 AM

I am sure there are people who will theink my poem is crap Mr Viv lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/14/2015 2:46:00 AM

LOL...I must read this to Dylan, my seven-year-old. Potty humor is the greatest humor to little boys, and I'm guilty of starting him young. When he had a dirty diaper at two-years-old. We'd sing "poop in your pants, sagging little pants, do a little dance with poop in your pants" Yes he could talk before he was potty trained and yes my mom-in-law HATED It...all the more reason to have fun even though it was SO wrong!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 7:29:00 AM

Your comment made me smile Rhonda - can just imagine your mother in Law's face when he started singing that one - nothing wrong in toilet humour and talking about bodily functions lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/13/2015 11:23:00 PM

I really want to make a comment here, but I might DUCK this one!! LOL hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 7:26:00 AM

No ducking the issue Arthur - tell me it was a crap poem lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2015 9:24:00 PM

oh my gosh, you were doing bathroom jokes even as a child. NO WONDER you are so good at them today. hahaha. Awesome, Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 7:25:00 AM

Just think where I could have been if I had started writing sooner Andrea - down the pan I guess if this poem is anything to go by or I could have been flushes with success lol:-) Hugs jan

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/13/2015 8:06:00 PM

So cute. Your mom must have been like mine and kept everything, or did this assignment get a call home? LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 7:24:00 AM

mum has a crystal clear memory from years ago but her short term memory is sadly going:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 3/13/2015 2:15:00 PM

Any more laughing this evening and I'll be all pooped out. Lovely little poem from you even way back then, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 6:34:00 PM

Makes me wonder where I would be if I'd taken up writing sooner - simply wasn't the right time until Bob got cancer:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2015 1:51:00 PM

Leave it to the mind of a child..Cute one.. thanks for your visit..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 6:34:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Sara:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/13/2015 1:32:00 PM

how lucky can you get by keeping your rhyme intact at 7, jan.. you were already funny them.. witty!.. likey!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 6:33:00 PM

I was blessed with a good sense of humour from an early age:-) hugs jan xx

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/13/2015 11:29:00 AM

Hehehe this is hilarious Jan.. sad part I am actually picturing this while reading ;) you had me laughing out loud tonight.. love and hugs W

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 11:36:00 AM

That Wilma is hilarious - I am laughing now! - the poem is actually quite factual - even in the eyes of a child lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/13/2015 8:52:00 AM

Talk about pushing the envelope!!! LOL Let me know if the "anti-naughties" police pay you a visit! And you were 7??? Now every thing is falling into place! LOL Hugs, Jack xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 9:03:00 AM

LOL - Yes Jack I truly was about 7 when I came out with this verse - mum is 92 and reminds me of it often when I talk about how i write poetry now - hope I've matured a bit since I wrote this - on looking at its content - maybe not lol:-) Hugs jan xx