My First Love

The first time I saw him I was smitten,
       he wore black leather;
             and in nice weather.
    That day our destiny was written,
          my heart he held tight;
                  all through that long night.
       I was a captive to his stare hypnotic;
              it was sensual, surreal and erotic.
 
                      Oh, how he broke this . . .  girl.

I was innocent and he, my first love,
       and I got swept up;
            drinking from his cup.
    He was the restless hawk and I, the dove,
          his voice my haven:
                  his hair so raven.
       I did not see that I had lost all my friends:
             and family-   and on him my life depends.

                     Oh, how he broke this . . .  girl.

His kisses could be sweet and turn cruel,
       and often they hurt;
            and I felt like dirt.
    He was the king and I was his jewel,
            yet, his words held me;
               but my soul said flee.
        I needed to abandon this dreadful hell,
               this deep chasm I was in like a jail cell;
             I did-  yet a piece of him will always dwell.

                               oh, how he broke this girl,

       but could not break this . . .  pearl.


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May 8, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/My First Love
Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1020-540-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the Garinage Contest
sponsor, Gregory R. Barden

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations on your win! This one got me.
George   Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 2:36 AM
Many congrats on your top notch win Constance. I love this poem. Elaine
Sands Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Wow. Very well written BW. I love the ending :)
Warrior Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Riveting so far BW...will check later...love and light...^WW^
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