My First Date Poets Dozen

my fourteenth summer. .  
the son of a preacher man
showing me heaven

His teasing ways and his boyish grin.
How easily I was taken in!

I felt like a woman in my cute short culottes and wearing pink frost lipstick
that he’d kissed off my mouth before the night was through.

My best friend, with her guy, was in the front seat of the car.
My date, her older cousin, was my first sweet honey bee.
We made out in the back seat, but he never got too  far.
I was raised to value my virginity.
But my youthful heart was wishing we could kiss eternally!


Written Dec. 30, 2015
for The Poet's Dozen Contest of Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
Lariviere Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 12:02 AM
blast from past, good poem
Lane Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Good job, Andrea!
Johnson Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 6:19 PM
A fun win, Andrea. Love, Joyce
Scars Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Congrats on your placement Andrea :)-*smiles*
A  Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, love your first date imagery :)
Fraser Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 1:53 PM
A delightful date with young hearts racing, lips gracing eternally ~~ good luck in the contest, hugs//James xx
Walker Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 6:12 AM
Ah, first love. What a great memory.
Martin Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Enjoyed reading about your date, Andrea!
Callus Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Aw Andrea...a lovely first date that you'll never forget! Glad it turned out great for you:) ~ paul
Wigley Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Great stuff, Andrea. I can visualize a hot August evening, a Chevy Biscayne and the sounds of 'Rag Doll' by Frankie Valli punctuating the occasional 'Dean, stop it!!!". Same over here, but with crappier cars. Your poem will do well, Andrea. Viv x
Smith Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 6:16 PM
lalalalalala(fingers in my ears)...I have two daughters : ) ... great memories
Horsman Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:21 PM
This poetry Andrea is just you, i love it to bits, its really cool..happy new year
Paras Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Written with flair!Charmed life you led, I dare say. This brought back many clumsy moments of my youth!
Anish Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:24 AM
Do you remember the song about a preacher man - with the line "The only boy that could ever reach me was the son of a preacher man". I like that tune! Please let me know what you think of "Hate Talk". I have been reading I.B. Singer - have you ever read his books. He took the noble prize. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
A. Sharma Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 2:17 AM
So lovely Andrea..loved that eternal kiss.. Gl in contest dear!!
May Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Love how you began your poem Andrea...I am reminded of that song by Dusty Springfield...Nicely penned...hugs
Campbell Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Nice one, Andrea. I was there in that car with you. Haha. That's writing real, isn't it? Good on you.
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Good flow and pleasant sounding filled with great imagery exhorting the sights and sounds locked in the memory and heart of all teenaged girls. Emile.
Sage Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:46 PM
excellent write Andrea...
Muideen Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Lol! Great piece. In young ages, Heaven knows our sole-mate. We only wish..........A.M.
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:01 PM
whew.. what a first date that makes me really envious, andie!.. lovely piece.. mail soon!.. miss you and huggs
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 1:08 PM
aww cute memories Andrea:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Manassian Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Ahem Ahem Ahem....nothing like young love, Andrea....PK's can be naughty. I should know...I am a Pastor's Kid. ;) I'm sending you an email...Got a question for you. Hugs
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