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My First Date and Love - a Poet's Dozen

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the wind was roaring an open road forever- trees a blur of green My brother brought him home for supper one day, I recall it was a beautiful warm day in the month of May. I hung on the back of his powerful motorcycle, happiness Oh, this was love! I had never felt such joy- in my young heart He was everything that my parents hated Rough, streetwise, a real bad boy, reckless To me he was a guy that God himself created He left me breathless and my memory is endless But a life with him would have been dumb and careless __________________________ December 23, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Haiku/Couplet/Free Verse/Quintain/ My First Date and Love- A Poet's Dozen Copyright Protected, ID 16-738-196-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, A Poet's Dozen 2, First Date, sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2016 9:50:00 PM

thank you Broken Wing, for supporting my comment. :) LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2016 7:21:00 PM

Broken, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~

Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2016 7:47:00 PM

Thank you for the congratulations, appreciate !

Lin Lane

Date: 1/9/2016 6:28:00 PM

A sweet placement, Constance. Well done.

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 12:56:00 PM

Lin, thank you so much ~

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/9/2016 6:00:00 PM

Some first dates are worth it, just for the memories. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Lu Loo

Date: 1/9/2016 4:05:00 PM

Broken Wings, congrats on your placement :) *smiles*

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:13:00 PM

Laura, thanks so much for the congrats and the smiles ~

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2016 3:38:00 PM

Broken, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:13:00 PM

Thanks for the congrats, Skat

John Hamilton

Date: 1/9/2016 3:19:00 PM

Congrats on your nice win, well done!

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:14:00 PM

John, thanks so much for the congrats and the well done, appreciate ~

Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2016 3:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Broken Wing, love your first date imagery.

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:14:00 PM

Eve, thanks for the congratulations ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/9/2016 3:12:00 PM

Love the way you shared this first love memory with us, Broken Wings. Beautifully done, and congratulations with your nice placement in Silent One's contest. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:16:00 PM

Sandra, thanks for the beautifully and the congratulations, so nice ~

James Inman

Date: 12/29/2015 11:05:00 AM

Ahh, the ever present bad boy. Well written grouping of forms. Flows nicely, BW.

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 8:21:00 PM

James, thank you the compliment and the encouragement ~

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/27/2015 6:32:00 AM

I'm so in love with it, it is very beautiful and deep , it is so true and pure....Like seriously great job..I salute you...hugs / / :) dalia

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:22:00 PM

Dalia, thanks for visiting my poem and for the beautiful and the compliments, appreciate ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2015 4:46:00 PM

LOVe love love it. I saw this on the PM list and just had to take a look!!!

Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 5:37:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for visiting my poem and loving it

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/24/2015 8:51:00 AM

This is a stunning write using a variety of forms and a fabulous read. Thank you and Happy Holidays. Lots Of Love Armand.

Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2015 9:05:00 AM

Maurice, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, SEASONS GREETINGS

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/24/2015 3:10:00 AM

I loved this little glimpse into your exciting past. I married my bad boy. It lasted twelve years and taught me many lessons and how to make my second marriage endure. 34 years and still going. I so enjoyed this poem Constance! Mele Kalikimaka! Aloha, Connie

Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2015 6:44:00 AM

Connie, thanks for the visit and the comment, oh yes, often I wonder what became of my bad boy, but I listened to my parents and married a wonderful guy, sadly he is only a name engraved now, but it was worth every moment we had !

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/23/2015 11:54:00 PM

Loved this, but to be honest, I was just riding a moped! shhhhhhh :)

Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2015 6:45:00 AM

Arthur, thanks for visiting, lol, yes I think we saw you as we roared by !!