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Soup Contest, Sponsored by Robert James Liguori
08/31/23

My favorite soup Is not too spicy But I don't like it too bland It must be easy to digest Though sometimes It’s a little saucy! Alphabet pasta Is a vital ingredient Add a dash of rhyme A pinch of metaphors A good dollop of humour Mmmmm it’s simply delicious! I’d invite everyone To join me And dip into Poetry Soup!

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 10/28/2023 7:31:00 PM

This is so wonderfully clever, I just love it. Darling, cute and fun to read!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/1/2023 9:21:00 AM

Love the soup and you my friend

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2023 10:08:00 AM

thanks sweet Eve, Robert didnt like my poem but hey ho there are other contests to try:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/31/2023 4:32:00 PM

I like poetry soup, with rhymes and riddles and funny giggles, especially when written by Jan, :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2023 5:22:00 PM

aww thanks Vie:-) hugs Jan xx

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/31/2023 2:05:00 PM

wonderful invitation, i loved all kind of soups, spicy or bland, a very enjoyable poem, thanks a lot

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2023 2:39:00 PM

thanks Yann xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/31/2023 1:11:00 PM

a yummy recipe, jan! i'm always up for a bowl! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2023 2:32:00 PM

I would share a bowl with you any day of the year Ilene xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/31/2023 12:04:00 PM

Brilliant Jan, poetry soup is the tastiest one ever, I come back for some every other day, very cleverly put together this one, a winner in my eyes, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2023 2:31:00 PM

I was on a 'soup free' diet for over 9 months, I am so happy to be back:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2023 11:21:00 AM

- A bowl for me too, thanks ... sounds yummy ... hope I get the capital letters - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2023 2:30:00 PM

Im so sorry I missed your poem I am stunned and thrilled to be included especially with Ilene, she is my favourite humourous poet on soup:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/31/2023 10:33:00 AM

Sounds very tasty Jan, I'll have a large bowlful thanks. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2023 11:11:00 AM

thanks Tom, its usually quite wholesome but it can get a little toxic and it sours the pot but its nothing we can't handle as we have seen it before. hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/31/2023 9:56:00 AM

Add a dash of rhyme A pinch of metaphors A good dollop of humor--I like your recipe-- splendid poetry, Jan. Much enjoyed the tasty soup--clever vocabulary.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2023 11:09:00 AM

thanks so much Vijay:-) hugs jan xx