My Father Raised Roses

My father raised roses from the very root
     they grew in straight, taunt, magnificent shoots.
They stretched high determined to touch the sky’s very brink
     in blooms of mammoth reds, whites, yellows and pinks.
They caught the eye with scented perfumed fragrance
    that aroused the senses of every passers glance.
Long stemmed, petal laden tight budding beauties
    that swayed rhythmically in the wind as if by duty.
Sightseers awed as nature’s bounty prevailed
    and  he pruned and tended them each day without fail.
They gave him both joy and pleasure,
    a satisfaction he found nothing else could measure.
In his garden he kept his dreams in secret quiet solitude
    strengthened by persistence and tenacity imbued.
In his heart lay some inner deeper beauty flowing 
    from the scented rose to a hidden unknowing 
    that would be forever him.
I went by the house today
    so many years after he had passed away.
Everything was changed, not a rose or bush to spare, 
    and the garden - it was no longer there.
Only with my eyes tightly closed
    could I see and recall the beauty of the rose.
The saying then is true for all women and men
    you never can go home again.
Everything changes and passes into time,
    for a moment, brief as it was, I saw it in my mind.
I saw him - just as I remembered, in his element, well and alive 
    tending each bud and blossom where he once thrived.
I wanted to embrace, wrap him close against my breast
	but the vision was his and I was but a guest.


For you Pop, Dec.27th, 1983
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 13, 2016 at 12:57 AM
DM Babbit, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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January 10, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Congrats on your win in the Dad Contest! Thanks for sharing with us.
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January 6, 2016 at 11:59 AM
DM Babbit, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
Babbit Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Thanks fof reading.
Tunick Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 4:35 AM
Ahhh.... another poem like music. You've created a rose for your father.
Babbit Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:35 AM
Thanks for reading, appreciats it.
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Lovingly written. I remember my dad in the garden. He raised a good share of our food and always added some flowers for Mama. Love Joyce
Babbit Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Thank you for reading, so many shared memories.
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January 5, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. As I read about your father and his beautiful roses my mind continued to drift back to Downton Abbey Village Flower show where the Countess gave first place to Bill Molesley for the best flower.
Babbit Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Glad to be a participant. Thanks for the opportunity. DMB
A  Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 12:01 PM
DM, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
Babbit Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 3:45 PM
TY and Happy New Year. DMB
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 6:43 PM
What wonderful memories and a lovely tribute to your father. I cannot go near my parents house since it was sold I will keep the memories as they were:-) hugs Jan xx
Babbit Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 3:45 PM
TY Jan, Happy New Year.
Lane Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 3:46 PM
What lovely memories of your father, DM. I'm glad you can still envision him there. VERY well written.
Babbit Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 3:46 PM
TY and a Happy New Year.
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