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My Eternal Grief

I’ve been forsaken by perpetual pain, sweltering in sorrow and deep misery- Now only memories of despair remain. FOR GRIEF-STRICKEN AM I... My heart encompassed by an ebony stain, enraptured by dejection and injury- In my mind she dies a thousand times in vain. Rescue me from dolor, unshackle this chain, please find me relief, bestow true liberty- This poignant disappointment is so arcane. FOR GRIEF-STRICKEN AM I... -------------------------- 11 syllables in each line howmanysyllables.com Date: February 25, 2019 Contest: Writing Challenge, Feb 2019, Roundel Form- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 3/7/2019 6:17:00 PM
beautifully sad Lu Loo:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2019 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Laura, great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/6/2019 5:58:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Roundel ~
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Date: 2/25/2019 12:22:00 PM
ohh, wrenchingly beautiful, lou... soulful lines capture the heart's angst!... huggs
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