My Dream Vacation

Sand sparkles like diamonds under my feet. Sun smiles in blue sky. I watch seagulls fly while sitting with ease at my beach retreat. I don’t need palaces like at Versailles, museums or other attractions to see. I relish instead dusk’s peace in cerise. My dream vacation includes family. Food, laughter and good times seem never to cease. The sun’s warming rays that darken our skin as we jump the waves that roll toward the shore bring special magic to light us within, and life is a dream with joy at its core. I feel again like I am eleven. Maybe, just maybe, I am in heaven! March 22, 2022 For the "My Dream Vacation Poetry Contest" of L MILTON HANKINS
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Gasun Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 3:59 AM
Such a wonderful dream vacation my dear friend Andrea. After reading your poem, it makes me dream the same thing as I miss my family so much. I pray that your dream vacation will come true. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your shining win and this superb write! Blessings! Hugs.
Agustin Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 3:24 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your dream vacation, making me long for vacation with family... God bless you.
Brul Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations Andie..Your dream vacation makes me dream...All the best.
Poteet Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 6:40 PM
Well-said, Andrea. It is my kind of vacation, relaxing with family and friends. Well-deserved honor in Milton's contest.
Brown Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on win! Blessings ~ Debra
Alex Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 9:28 AM
"I feel again like I am eleven. Maybe, just maybe, I am in heaven!" - You give beautiful punches. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 7:50 AM
Nicely done, Andrea. I enjoyed your poem a lot. Congratulations!
Kerr Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 5:43 PM
Hello Andrea, This stunning poem is perfection itself. A cascade of delightful details. With regard to your reflections on “Crier” I’m honoured by your generosity. I sometimes confuse Haikus and Kimos too. Best wishes Howard
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 6:21 AM
"Sand sparkles like diamonds under my feet" - the first line itself takes me to a vacation in my dream, Dear Andrea. There is nothing more delightful than being in a favourite place with family ! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
Baker Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 5:24 PM
It sounds like you just want to have a little fun. I enjoyed your poem, Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Bill
Jayasankar Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 10:25 AM
I loved the imagery your poem created Ria... I know how much you love your family... Same with me... A Fav... Hugs... ~ Ani
Brul Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 9:30 PM
Your imagery sparkles like precious jewels. Loved this! A fave!
Horsman Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 7:39 PM
This is lovely Andrea, i followed every word, wishing oh so wishing.
One Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 1:55 PM
sounds lovely.. your really gave the reader an image of your favourite place..
Chunn Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Poetry that uplifts is very special. This is beautiful. I think I need a "Dream Vacation".
Leffanta Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 11:58 AM
Well said! Nothing compares with feeling Joy! Aloha!
Bauer Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 11:48 AM
wow, andrea! this is a masterpiece! i think you've just won the contest...
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 12:44 PM
that was sure nice of you. I wish I could think of more images for it!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 10:31 AM
So beautiful! You must have a lovely family!
May Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 7:54 AM
"I relish instead dusk’s peace in cerise", Lovely write Andrea, best wishes
Pandit Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 5:27 AM
Your poem exudes the joy of being there with your family. Enjoyed reading your descriptions, Andrea.
DiMino Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 3:55 AM
Peaceful and content, where one is in life, is the wealth of the universe. Lovely writing!
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