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In meditation she dwells, my divine avatar and spiritual teacher; I follow her melodic flute- She says, nothing is ever put in your path, without a reason and lesson; dig deep my child, for the answers and in meditation I am falling- Going deep, deep into my being, and what I see is beautiful; my inner soul has butterfly wings, and I soar . . . Over mountains high and valleys green, I see free-flowing water; the waves and ripples, and swaying sweet fragrant lovely flowers- She talks so softly, be meek my child; this is not a weakness, but peace and goodness and kindness; it shows great strength, serenity and self worth, control . . . And I drift in my tranquility, with my divine spiritual avatar; following, following her melodic flute- _________________________ December 8, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/My Divine Avatar Copyright Protected, ID 17-9696-02-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Avatar sponsor, Line Gauthier Third Place

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Date: 12/16/2017 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear!
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Date: 12/16/2017 5:54:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 12/16/2017 6:31:00 AM
Very, very nice, Constance, I loved this - so much emotion and substnative thought, and the imagery is superb! Blessings and congratulations, my friend, on a fine win! :-) <3
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Date: 12/15/2017 11:36:00 PM
Flows very nicely. Thanks for your entry and Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/9/2017 10:24:00 AM
Lovely lovey words that take us into your meditation with you. Very calming and enlightening. Great poem.
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Date: 12/9/2017 9:42:00 AM
Elegant expressions this serene poem be, BW. Your pen takes us on a meditative journey accompanied by the sound of peaceful silence. Beautiful innervisions put into prose by your gifted pen. Sparkling poetry! Aurora bright write. Love and joy always.
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Date: 12/9/2017 7:07:00 AM
Awesome depiction of meditation experience, Constance
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:39:00 PM
Thank you for taking me along with you on this brilliant spiritual journey. Gorgeously written and soothing.
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:03:00 PM
Lovely, soft thoughts, peaceful and comforting. Best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:55:00 PM
Wonderful write, Broken Wings, I love the smooth sense of being.. luck in the contest... and my poem is true :"(.. moral of the story I think is ; say your peace now before you have no other chance. Hugs eve
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