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My Dad-My Hero - Win

( The poem is in a new literary form called Sonnetina Rispetto, originally a Tuscan folk song of the 14th Century. This is new version of the form called Rispetto) My dad was a man of honor His love I ruminate over A godly love he has given Power of his hands so secure. There’s nothing we could not endure He’s my mentor, my friend, my man My dad was a man of honor His love I ruminate over. So busy left slushy things to mom Someone that I can count upon A godly love he has given My father, my mentor, my man. My dad was a man of honor His love I ruminate over Dr. Ram Mehta ======================= Form: Sonnetino Rispetto First Place Win Contest: My Dad by Leonara Ghalinta *This form Sonnetina Rispetto h as 14 lines with 8 syllables in each line. It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or with an Octave(8) and a Sestet(6) lines. The rhyme scheme is as follows: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2. The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2...stands for the refrain lines in the poem. ================================

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Date: 3/14/2014 1:47:00 AM
Hi, Dr a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:13:00 PM
Lovely form and words. Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:38:00 PM
how poignant this is, dr.ram.. sweet congrats on your well-deserved award!.. huggs
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:17:00 PM
Love new forms, Dr. Ram...had not seen this one. I like the line - "So busy left slushy things to mom". It would not made a good repeating line; but by itself, it says much. I can see the song nature to it with the repeats...Congratulations on your win and on your fine mentor of a dad.
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Date: 3/13/2014 11:04:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours Dr. Ram, Congrats on your win.......Roger
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:39:00 AM
An inspiring poem ^__^... COngratulations Dr. Ram!!!!
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Date: 3/13/2014 6:31:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Dr Ram. Full of images of strength, which I loved. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:32:00 AM
A great win Dr. Ram and thanks for showing this new style...with your win you launch a challenge...i love the learning on the soup. Congratulations (and thanks). Cheers H
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Dr. Ram. Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:54:00 AM
Thanks, Leo, for the award
Date: 3/13/2014 2:16:00 AM
Beautifully written Dr. Ram and congratulations on the win... Verlena
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Date: 1/14/2011 7:23:00 PM
Very nice poem! And I am very honored that you are using "my new" Sonnetina Rispetto poetry style.I got nothing more to say about it but that I created myself back on September 9 of 2009.I will really appreciate it if you include my name to it as the creator.Sent you a private email.And thanks for liking and using my S.R. God bless you.D.
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Date: 1/14/2011 11:27:00 AM
A lovely poem. Nice write.
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Date: 1/8/2011 4:17:00 PM
Good example of this kind of poem. The second anniversary of my father's passing was January 1.
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Date: 1/7/2011 1:50:00 PM
Good writing. Fathers are dear to our heart, thus make good subjects to write about. Thanks for your kind comments on my poem, Quick, I need a doctor.
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Date: 1/7/2011 9:05:00 AM
New Soup Mail Dr. Ram.. luv..
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Date: 1/7/2011 7:59:00 AM
Beautifully written in acknowledgment of a man who seems to depict what a father should be. Lovely write.
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Date: 1/7/2011 4:03:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to a father, this is a great form of writing, enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/6/2011 1:56:00 PM
honourable words for a honourable man and hindsight affords an overview we do not as children, or even young adults possess, Dr Ram speaking personaly.
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Date: 1/6/2011 8:17:00 AM
How wonderful that your father is your hero. Bravo to you. A nice tribute. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/5/2011 8:10:00 PM
Sweetly remembered your father,Dr.Ram.This going to win the contest I hope.For me also father is hero
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Date: 1/5/2011 7:38:00 PM
Very impressive piece Dr. Ram and luv this new form of Rispetto too.. can hardly wait for u to post your new contest requiring this form .. sounds very exciting ... enjoyed the read about a wonderful Dad u so admire and emulate my friend... good luck in the contest by Crystal...with luv..
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Date: 1/5/2011 6:50:00 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to your father Dr.Mehta.The form is a complex one.Must be a winner in the contest.Goodluck in the contest.
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:39:00 PM
well done Dr, Ram.. good luck in this contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/5/2011 3:23:00 PM
ps. Hey, by the way: what ever happened to your contest using this form??? I was looking for it to see your rules and it is nowhere to be found over in the contest section!!
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Date: 1/5/2011 3:22:00 PM
Dr. Ram, a wonderful tribute to your father. I found that kind of humorous, leave the "slushy" things to your mom. Maybe slushy means for you what we mean when we say mundane. There is another word to describe emotional things but I can't recall it right now. Good luck in the contest. Luv, andrea
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