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My Beautiful Mother

Soft natured and hardworking, she's the joy of our home, Elegantly endearing, a smiling polychrome, Our house an empty swing, without her under its dome, When she's there, songs keep ringing, our home becomes Shalom. 04/17/17 For contest: Form M - Monorhyme Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 4/24/2017 10:03:00 PM
Very nice. I wrote one for my mom called Lillian :) Thanks for reading She Slept.
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Date: 4/22/2017 6:57:00 PM
Nicely written , Jo, congratulations on your win. ~*
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Date: 4/20/2017 2:41:00 PM
Jo CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this wonderful Monorhyme.
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 4/21/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, Constance:) all glory be to God:)
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 4/21/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Constance:) all glory be to God:)
Date: 4/19/2017 8:37:00 AM
Hi Jo, Your love for your mother shines bright in this well written piece .Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/17/2017 11:03:00 AM
what a beautiful tribute Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2017 10:15:00 AM
A beautiful poetic tribute to your mother. I can feel the love in this. Good luck in the contest my friend.
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