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You broke my heart- my darling and left it bleeding, I am shattered, battered and ravaged forever; my soul and spirit mangled and lost in anguish. I recall kissing you goodbye for the last time, that cold and stormy winter morning; then the police came, to tell me you had crashed, and you were dead. I have so many memories, memories that should comfort; but they leave me melancholy and missing you, you were my heart of hearts, my soulmate, my lover. now you live only in a secret place within me, my truelove, a name engraved. I remember- I remember dragging you to the opera, you hated opera but came only because you loved me; oh, Tchaikovsky's Sleeping Beauty and Swan Lake, the sensuous sweet melody often put you to sleep. but I dreamed of being a dancer, and you encouraged me; well darling, I am a dancer now, and you are always with me. Each performance is for you, I pour out my sadness; and torment and grief as I twirl and leap into the air, I imagine you in the front row, smiling with pride. Until my last breath, my darling, the pieces of my heart, will lay in ruin. ____________________________ February 7, 2017 Poetry/Verse/You Broke My Heart Copyright Protected, ID 17- 873-305-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. You Broke My Heart Contest sponsor, Nicola Bryne Third Place

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Date: 2/12/2017 5:06:00 AM
Your pain is palpable Constance. Like poetry, dance is such a wonderful way of expressing yourself. I hope it helps you heal.
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Date: 2/7/2017 9:56:00 PM
Such sorrow, and yet I can sense the tears of joy as she dances away! A great poem and GL
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