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My Only Thorn

I am a rogue rose with only one thorn near my last petal that sways with the breeze~ amidst the daylight My thorn sees me with eyes so deep and hugs me tight with arms so warm I love him~ My only One last thorn who cares~ to guard Me. 01.18.2021 For A Diminished Hexaverse Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/30/2021 7:48:00 AM

Duty or destiny - it doesn't matter to the thorn. It just is. I really enjoyed this write JCBB. :) Linda

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/23/2021 9:54:00 AM

What a wonderful and creative take on a thorn JCB! I really like this verse. I will never view the "thorns" in my life the same way. Thank you for the perspective. Congrats and kudos on your win!

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/23/2021 3:12:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/22/2021 7:19:00 PM

JCB, I was a pleased to read your Diminished Hexaverse with great imagery and flow . Congratulations on your winning write. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/22/2021 7:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/22/2021 3:16:00 PM

BIG congrats on your well-deserved win, JCB. Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/22/2021 2:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" I roses but I love pink roses the best. Enjoy your win/day/weekend with blessings................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2021 12:08:00 PM

- Beautifully described, JCB :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2021 2:17:00 AM

An intelligent write. All roses have thorns as a protection. Hope you'll do well in the contest. ~~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/18/2021 2:07:00 AM

Excellent write. I enjoyed this so much and it is a blessing to all who read it. Love it. God bless you always

Jan Allison

Date: 1/18/2021 1:19:00 AM

what a super poem, I never thought of the thorns as protecting the flower like this it really is an enduring sign of love:-) got to say i am not a rose fan much prefer carnations:-) hugs jan xx