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 Music of the Night               

Confined beneath the theater's stage Disgraced, he paces within his cage Listening to music played onstage Beset by abject loneliness, not rage Disfigured Phantom shrouded by night Once Broadway's toast, he sings alone so fear won’t incite “Garish light of day” offends, too bright As Christine sings, he bemoans his plight Hours pass till the theater’s empty Gently his hands caress each piano key Like he is stroking her face on the marquis When the play ends, his soul is set free Would Christine scream if she saw his face He dares not step forth; his feelings encase Her song to his ears wraps him with tender embrace But concealed he remains, not inviting disgrace Play's chorus resounds; he waits patiently Only after hours might he perform shamelessly His late-night ritual enacts faithfully Singing for the woman he’ll love endlessly He dreams one day of resigning to temptation Revealing himself and discovering her elation

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Date: 7/27/2019 12:40:00 PM
Carolyn, I like this poem. 'Wishing I could Hear your voice again Knowing that I Never would Dreaming of you Won't help me to do All that you dreamed I could' Andrew Lloyd Webber - The Phantom of the Opera
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Date: 2/20/2019 8:15:00 AM
Wow! What an excellent delivery, Carolyn! Phantom of the opera will always be a favourite with young and old. I love the ease with which your poem flows and rhymes. Emotionally, the Phantom holds all the right cards! ~ Congratulations on placing first! Love // paul
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Date: 2/18/2019 2:31:00 PM
I see this placed number ONE. Congrats for that, sweetie.
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Date: 2/17/2019 12:49:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 1st place in the contest Carolyn :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2019 2:40:00 AM
I am pleased and amazed that you have compassion, not horror, for the Phantom. He is one of the great romantics of all time, and he only wants to love her, but so often, people miss that. I love your vivid piece, evocative of the strains of Phantom's agonized and enraptured voice. Congratulations! Truly, this is the Music of the Night!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/17/2019 6:50:00 PM
The Phantom has always seemed to be a sympathetic character, Andrew. It wasn't his fault his face was scarred and who can blame him for loving Christine. Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 2/16/2019 8:04:00 PM
I can't totally remember the story line but you certainly captured the essence of this story very very well, Carolyn. (I saw the movie long ago. Have you seen the Broadway play?)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/16/2019 8:06:00 PM
No, I saw the Broadway performers in Ft. Lauderdale a few years ago. Also saw a similar musical that was just called "Phantom." It's hard to beat a timeless love story that includes tragedy and beautiful music. Thanks for reading, Andrea.
Date: 2/16/2019 7:45:00 PM
Carolyn, this is one of my favorite operas, and I was fortunate to see it on Broadway. Your lovely, well-written poem brings back memories of the powerful emotions experienced through the music. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/16/2019 8:04:00 PM
Broadway ticket prices have risen dramatically in the last few years. The Ft. Lauderdale performance I saw was excellent, but we couldn't dine at Sardi's before the show. Thanks for reading, Sandra.
Date: 2/16/2019 6:01:00 PM
Hello Carolyn … I kind of see your poem as a very sad tale, with a fear of rejection. Very nice Carolyn - Lindsay
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Date: 2/16/2019 3:29:00 PM
A beautfiul tribute, Carolyn. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Date: 2/16/2019 3:16:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Carolyn. Many congrats on your first place. Well Done. Elaine
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Date: 2/16/2019 12:44:00 PM
i do feel the longing of the phantom for his beloved, carolyn... when i watched this on broadway, the bittersweet lines , songs touched me like this grreeat poem... big congrats and huggs!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/16/2019 2:47:00 PM
It's wonderful you got to see it on Broadway, Nette. I saw a performance in Fort Lauderdale's huge theater. One of the best plays ever, and I'm not often fond of musicals. This is an exception.
Date: 2/16/2019 11:36:00 AM
My son and I love Phantom of the Opera so I eagerly dove into your poem which definitely delivered the musical's feel. You took me there with great flowing rhyme full of the emotion the story induces. I thoroughly enjoyed 'being' with this poem. Beautifully written. All the best ...CayCay
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/16/2019 12:01:00 PM
How kind your comments are. Thanks for reading, CayCay!
Date: 2/16/2019 9:48:00 AM
A phantom hoping to be her "angel of music"...Congrats on your win Carolyn..
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Date: 2/16/2019 9:39:00 AM
A well deserved top win for you Carolyn..you chose a great theme and delivered it flawlessly. Congrats.
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Date: 2/16/2019 9:22:00 AM
Awesome piece! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo!
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Date: 2/16/2019 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations for your great win Carolyn :)
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Date: 2/16/2019 8:32:00 AM
I love Phantom of the opera and have watched is several times... Great flow and rhymes in your wondeful poem Carolyn.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/16/2019 9:19:00 AM
Wow! Thanks, Silent One.
Date: 2/15/2019 5:41:00 PM
Excellent! Well written Carolyn :)
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Date: 2/15/2019 3:42:00 PM
(Ps I got your package today, thank you!)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/15/2019 4:23:00 PM
I appreciate you letting me know. Glad it arrived!
Date: 2/15/2019 3:41:00 PM
I love 'Phantom of the Opera' this is so tenderly told, so majestically sad, so tragically lovely!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/15/2019 4:23:00 PM
It is a wonderful play, Michelle. Only saw it for the first time about five years ago, but listened to the music much earlier. Thanks for reading! Hugs, Carolyn
Date: 2/15/2019 9:33:00 AM
I never saw the movie, nor have I read the book. After reading your delightful poem I feel like I've missed out on some thing special. Lovely poem, Carolyn. Have a wonderful weekend. Love & hugs, Charlie :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/15/2019 12:18:00 PM
Phantom and Les Miserables tie for the two saddest musicals I've seen. Thanks for reading, Charlie!
Date: 2/15/2019 7:55:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, this is such a wonderful write. The Phantom Of the Opera, one of my favourite books. Love the content of this write. Such beautiful images flow through my mind as I read down your wonderful lines, I can feel his loneliness. You have caught the darkness of the piece, the love, the longing, such an excellent write Carolyn. A fave. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/14/2019 7:25:00 PM
You have it; music is better than chocolates on Valentine's Day! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/14/2019 5:52:00 PM
Very nice work my friend. BG
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Date: 2/14/2019 3:42:00 PM
Beautifully written Carolyn. Tom.
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