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Music Breezes

Music Breezes Once I walked in a garden yellow, A soft rain falling on my umbrella, Music breezes filled my ears, And I had tears, I had tears. I was lost, my brother ran and left me, Running from the rain he did flee. I was lost, who would take care of me? I was just three, just three. Soon I heard a sweet sweet voice, My mother calling, comfort noise, Soon I was found and warm and safe, She kissed my face, my little face. One day I was in the garden store, Saw this small stone figure dressed as yore. And ‘tho it was still in cold December, I bought it to remember, I remember.

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Date: 1/23/2017 9:16:00 PM
Very well done my friend...SW...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 1/23/2017 11:26:00 AM
My only memory from age 3 is turning 4. We had just moved out to the country. I don't remember anything before that. To me this is a sad poem. Still, I love it:)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/23/2017 12:11:00 PM
Oh, Daniel, I meant it for a "happy ending" poem. Actually it was fictionalized. I didn't have a brother.
Date: 1/22/2017 9:39:00 AM
I had a similar experience. Some nuns rescued me and gave me balloons to get my mind off the fear. Such experience is never forgotten. Right on. Love, daver
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Date: 1/20/2017 12:59:00 AM
Precious memories. A comforting poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/19/2017 4:49:00 PM
Loved this Sunlite. What a beautiful and well written piece of poetry. Bravo my friend, bravo.
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