Mushroom Cloud Hotdish

Takeover Taiwan

Sino-Russ aims at Ukraine

Edges      burnt      and crisp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 1:30 PM
sadly its all coming true James, the situation with China and Taiwan is bubbling under and as for Ukraine its simply heartbreaking. hugs Jan xx
Goff Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 2:31 PM
So sad, thanks Jan!
Vangaveti Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 10:21 AM
Ukraine is trying hard not to give up!! The symbolism is at its best in this poem! I hope things settle down for good!!
Goff Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 5:26 PM
Me too Swetha!
Callus Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 10:45 AM
In a few words you project a dire world situation, James. The possibility of war is already there, but I lean on the positive side since I can't see any winners...just losers. ~ Regards // paul
Goff Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Agreed Paul!
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 8:45 PM
That would be so horrific. Great image, James
Goff Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 12:48 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 4:40 AM
I wonder what the outcome will be. I hope that it can be settled peaceably. Enjoyed reading your lines. Sara
Goff Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Me too! Thanks Sara!
Sambourne Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 6:01 PM
A dooms day scenario in your fine senryu that has sharp resonance with each passing day. If war, just conventional (I hope) but the loss of life would be tragically high. Congratulations on a thoughtful write. Brian
Goff Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 1:17 AM
Thank you Brian, neo-cons want a wag-the-dog diversion war to distract from America's implosion...
Alex Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 6:45 PM
You are, indeed, a great poet. So much thoughts for reflection. Symbolically great. Congratulations!
Goff Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 7:03 PM
Thank you Christuraj!
Peranteau Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 7:50 AM
yikes...you've scribed eerily hopefully the past...have a great new year dear poet...much love, james
Goff Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 7:02 PM
Thank you James!
DiMino Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Foolish people think it could not happen. Excellent write! Timely!
Goff Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:44 AM
News says Russia moving special urban-warfare unit to border today, hold your hats...
Wells Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 5:12 PM
Like the Cuban missile crisis! World War III will only last 15 minutes. YIKES! Very original use of the Senryru form! -Thomas
Goff Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 5:33 PM
So true Thomas
Babcock Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:27 AM
Pray that this does not become reality and better heads prevail. love phyl
Goff Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 5:32 PM
Agreed
Maverick Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:24 AM
We hope not its the case, I think the prime Movers get lost in the events they put in motion Oh well I pray for better.'
Goff Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Yes Joe, the square square under our feet shrinks daily...
Szoke Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Very dramatic with a frightening edge. Well said.
Goff Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Looking more true by the day, sad 2 say!
Horne Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 5:02 AM
a powerful write in just a few well chosen words - very clever write
Goff Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Say it ain't so Jack!
Jangid Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 6:27 PM
True and nice
Goff Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 8:13 PM
Thanks Arjun!
Debole Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 4:59 PM
James, I really like your use of a few pointed words to paint a strong image of an immediate threat to freedom.
Goff Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Thank you Gail...
Deo Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 10:52 AM
I join others in praying for Freedom, especially if speech & religion. Thank you Brother, Happy New Year. More than unbelievers, those who know Jesus/ Resurrection have FAITH
Goff Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 12:07 PM
Thank you Brother...
Neels Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 11:31 AM
You know exactly how to get your point across James! Enjoyed your wit. Hope you are good :)
Goff Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 9:47 PM
Dystopian satire!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 12:46 PM
I pray this does not become a reality. Well expressed my friend. Blessings xxoo
Goff Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Thanks Connie, agreed...
Baker Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Someone has got their ear to the wall. Sad but very likely outcome. Bill
Goff Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Satire hopefully again, Bill!
Rose  Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 9:44 AM
lol, lately I know the feeling of crisp , nice one Jim
Goff Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Vie!
Horne Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 1:21 PM
oh, I like this very clever write
Goff Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Thanks Jack! hope we don't see it!
Brown Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 1:36 PM
That's interesting, James ~ Debra
Goff Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Agreed Debra, lol!
Romios Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 6:11 PM
A very clever work, James. Impressed! Panagiota xxoo
Goff Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 6:44 PM
Thanks Pangie...
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