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Muse of My Soul

My muse opens my eyes to starlight, when in darkness I would cower. ~by poet
My dear muse is a faithful advisor An ancient spirit, a writing treasure. She guides my words, for hers are much wiser with perception far beyond all measure. We paint images; a pen is our brush. Crumbled pages lie about in the den where we huddle in thought, hour after hour. She insists life shouldn't be lived in a rush and smelling roses will heighten my Zen. My muse is inspiring, a moonflower. No vagabond muse, she's never wandered. Nor stargazer, scanning constellations. I always praise her for time not squandered and cannot blame her for my frustrations when I become distracted in mid thought. Asleep and drifting in the midnight sky, she fills my head with rhapsodies in dreams. Romantic notions whispered to my heart ~ Lines for a sonnet to make readers sigh when love is decreed beneath pale moonbeams. More journeys than I, has my muse traveled. Her metaphors are gifts offered to me when I'm lost for words, a bit unraveled. How grateful I am for her loyalty. Without her guidance I'd surely fall short of any claim of poetic success. Somewhat feisty, yet whimsically droll, urging me to write a mirthful retort. Skillfully she directs me with finesse, this glorious muse living in my soul. May 25, 2022 Form O - Ode Contest Sponsor - Constance LaFrance Theme - Person (although a muse, real to me)

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Date: 6/9/2022 4:19:00 AM
Jenna, beautiful poem, I love my Muse too and congratulations on your win in my Ode contest, wonderfully penned, and I like your quote also, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 6/2/2022 7:35:00 PM
Elegantly poetic, Jenna. Just as a tribute to your muse ought to be. Congrats on your win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/3/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to comment, Andrea.
Date: 6/1/2022 9:41:00 PM
Definitely there is a muse living within you.... never deserting you or wandering away from you... ! A true moon flower! Beautiful.....Jenna. Congratulations on your first place win...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/2/2022 7:05:00 AM
Thanks for your kind remarks, Valsa.
Date: 6/1/2022 7:43:00 PM
"Without her guidance I'd surely fall short" - Beat part of muse. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/2/2022 7:04:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughts, Chris.
Date: 6/1/2022 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write to your muse. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/2/2022 7:04:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Paula.
Date: 5/25/2022 5:33:00 PM
Mine's more of a daffodils and dandelions kinda guy.....deep rooted and a bit flashy at times....Beautifully written Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/25/2022 6:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, John. I'm sure you and your muse work as a well-balanced team. It's evident to me in your poetry that you guys run the gambit of ideas.
Date: 5/25/2022 3:26:00 PM
What a beautifully written ode, Jenna! I love the idea of "smelling roses will heighten my Zen". There is truth to the notion that we do our best work and think our best thoughts while relaxed. I am guilty of blaming my muse when the pages remain blank, but I think the real culprit is that life gets too busy and rushed and there simply isn't time to create. Your talent is marvelous to behold, my friend. I am always thankful when your muse "is a faithful advisor". Going in my Faves ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/25/2022 3:38:00 PM
Hi John. Thank you for the many kind thoughts you've given these lines. I'm sure my sweet muse is giving me a nudge as if to say, "It's about time you give me a little credit." lol I'm always happy to see you and read your gracious remarks.
Date: 5/25/2022 2:46:00 PM
What a glowing tribute to your muse Jenna, sometimes when your struggling a little whisper from them in your ear and you're flowing again. Our pages would be blank without them. A well written verse and I wish you good luck in the contest Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/25/2022 2:51:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly for your kind remarks, Tom. I'll let my muse know you're pleased with her help. I wonder if she has a name... she's never told me. Perhaps I can get it out of her, but she can be a bit secretive about her personal matters when she chooses to be.
Date: 5/25/2022 1:24:00 PM
Oh this is nice Jenna, constellations to frustrations, who’d of thought of rhyming them together, only a real muse! a dreamy unforced flow gathers pace, but always under control and measured, great one for the contest, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/25/2022 1:44:00 PM
Thanks so very much, David. I suppose after writing this I'd better give the kudos to my muse. I am delighted that you appreciate my poetry.
Date: 5/25/2022 1:04:00 PM
Incredibly fine writing, my dear Jenna. Your choice of words and your imagery are clearly inspired. You paint a lovely portrait of your writing environment. You give fitting tribute to your muse. I love the way your poem draws to a close. You write with boldness and courage, and I am proud of you!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/25/2022 1:42:00 PM
Dear Milt, I am humbled by your compliments. Thank you. I gladly give credit to whoever or whatever guides my thoughts. However, I'm sure my muse stands back, shakes her head at me when I choose to right some wrong by a misguided ne're do well. But if I were to look behind me, I've no doubt she'd be smiling.

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