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July.12.2023

Murmurs of My heart Poetry Contest

Sponsor- JCB Brul

when my sky turns stygian, heart murmurs- seek the rainbow that follows

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Paige Hind

Date: 7/18/2023 11:31:00 AM

Very beautiful, Valsa!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/16/2023 12:25:00 PM

And here - lub-dub - I thought - lub-dub - that I was - lub-dub - going to hear - lub-dub - the beating - lub-dub-lub-dub - 0f your heart. G-Dubs

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 7/16/2023 5:05:00 AM

Yoh! So nice monoku, Congratulations on your win ...Valsa.

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/15/2023 9:07:00 PM

Splendid! Congratulations and thank you for your participation in the contest. Blessings.^__^JCB

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/15/2023 7:08:00 AM

Wow!!!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2023 12:51:00 AM

"stygian" - A new vocabulary for me. Beautiful monoku. Congratulations!

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/12/2023 5:45:00 PM

waiting for rainbow is the best idea, excellent and persuasive poem, yann

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/12/2023 4:31:00 PM

A fine Monoku Valsa. There is rarely a cure without a little pain, but there is NEVER a RAINBOW without a little rain. .. Your Monoku has depth, meaning and beauty. 3 things I always look for in a work of art. Best wishes.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/12/2023 10:48:00 AM

Nice Monoku, Valsa. A typical Monsoon day. Your word stygian made me look at the dictionary.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/12/2023 8:58:00 AM

Nice Monoku, Valsa. I like anything that includes a rainbow. :-) Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill

Di11y Da11y

Date: 7/12/2023 8:42:00 AM

Looked up the word and recognised how wonderful the poem is - beautiful Valsa x

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/12/2023 8:23:00 AM

Stupendous Monoku. Dear Valsa. Who doesn't love rainbows?

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/12/2023 7:21:00 AM

Always a joy to think of the rainbow behind the stormy skies. I like the dual meaning you convey, Valsa.