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Mum Im Pregnant

Mummy, are you sitting down? No need to sob or gasp or frown There's something you should know today I promise, swear I'll be okay Your little girl is all grown up a gift, a life, feels so corrupt still in shock myself you see ...I swear he only touched my knee..... 27th May 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2011 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Choice Verse" contest Jodie. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/20/2011 9:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM in Brain's contest Jodie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2011 7:02:00 PM

Congrats Jodie on HM with this dynamic write and entry luv..

John Freeman

Date: 11/20/2011 4:53:00 PM

Haaaaaaaaa! cool thought for your worthy entry Jodie. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/20/2011 4:23:00 PM

I agree with Mike. I love the rhyme and the swing of it and the bit of humor. Congratulations, love, Joyce.

Mike Dailey

Date: 5/27/2011 9:11:00 AM

I liked this poem. It has good rhythm and rhyme which I consider essential for poetry though most won't agree with me. Mike

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/27/2011 6:17:00 AM

That is so funny, Jodie.... it reminds me of an article I read somewhere about a young teenage girl who got pregnant and swore she had been innocent and she must have gotten into her predicament from a toilet seat.