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I rise at the crack of dawn push-ups with a weight of ideas – rhymes with my eggs; a slice of daily bread, no juice, it gives me heartburn, so I go right to the ink -- in a manic frenzy you will find me scratching and reciting – the cat tilts curiously; the dog whimpers neglect – my wife is on the phone again with the parish priest, still wrapped in a towel, insisting he come over, as is, and begin an exorcism she saw on You Tube....

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Date: 4/18/2024 11:17:00 PM
I often wonder if it should be re-named (blue tube?) As it allows just enough info to let us Know things are awry.. Yet supresses much i Hear, that causes creators there to in the end Leave for Rumble or Patreon or whatever.? I am sending you a can of spaghetti btw It Was going to be worms..But I didn't want clause To get too excited if he knew, I"ll bug off now May God bless.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/19/2024 6:46:00 AM
Hi Joe; I hear ya. I agree, most of what we hear, even the silence we are allowed to have, is canned, rehashed old hash, meant to get in the way of clear thinking. Keep minds in constant turmoil, give us our daily dose of prescribed fear -- continue to fleece the minds and souls God's humanity.
Date: 4/17/2024 6:05:00 AM
- A completely ordinary day :))) - Great written with humor, Joe :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/17/2024 7:49:00 PM
I would not have it any other way:))) -- We are a noisy, righteous bunch. No down time here, living life to the fullest. Blessings my friend.
Date: 4/16/2024 6:05:00 PM
The contrast is mind-boggling, although... 'just another day at the office,' I guess. Amazing write, at least for me. Thanks, Gershon
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/16/2024 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon; you made my day! Blessings my friend.
Date: 4/13/2024 11:33:00 PM
Your days are quite busy. This was an effective poem of daily life.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/14/2024 3:48:00 AM
Hi Hilda; just an exaggeration for laughs. Hope I brought a smile to your face. Have a great weekend my friend.
Date: 4/13/2024 5:12:00 PM
sounds like you have a 'balanced' life--you with poetry and her with her own pursuits. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/14/2024 3:50:00 AM
Hi Sara; just my humble attempt at humor, hoping you got a giggle out of the read. Have a great weekend my friend. Blessings.
Date: 4/13/2024 8:47:00 AM
You are dedicated to poetry, my friend. Good thing she is pursuing her heart's wishes as you live and breath poetry. Win, win--balance!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/13/2024 8:59:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay; just a little fun write. So pleased you enjoyed the read. Have a great weekend.
Date: 4/13/2024 7:03:00 AM
Your morning's activities and your daily routine are so humorously narrated. The first stanza is so very interesting. I like the lines- "push-ups with a weight of ideas – rhymes with my eggs;" This has brought a smile to my lips. Have a great weekend, dear Joe!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/13/2024 9:01:00 AM
What the hay; smiles are as important as "one-a-day" and healthful walk. Pleased to assist this morning. Blessings my friend.
Date: 4/13/2024 6:17:00 AM
Love the descriptions in the first stanza.. This seems like a real life episode in your household... lol..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/13/2024 9:03:00 AM
A little poetic exaggeration, but in essence, Right On! Thank you, Si; have a great weekend my friend.
Date: 4/13/2024 5:37:00 AM
Exorcism is serious business and I doubt YouTube knows what's in store for her. Great poetry.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/13/2024 9:09:00 AM
For sure; people should not try all the things they see in media. Exorcism can be deadly for the amateur. Some things are best left to professionals~ like God. He is my sole/soul Authority and Source. Thank you, Victor.
Date: 4/13/2024 3:19:00 AM
lol been there done that, the exorcism of course, I had one done to me at age 13, and I'm glad to say it didn't take, lol, but thats another story Joe, have a wonderful day, love to Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/13/2024 3:27:00 AM
Age 13...ouch! My Sicilian girlfriend's mother would walk around me stomping her feet -- I also still write. Blessings and hugs. Have a great day, Vie.

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