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Moving?( This Is My Piece For the Duo's Contest. Although It's a Solo. Lol)

(Sung slowly) Away away my Carolyn away away with thee I wanted you in my paradise but it will never be Away away my Carolyn away away with me for you have been my secret love ere sence I first saw thee Away away my Carolyn away away with thee with you, you take my happiness forever gone with thee Away away my Carolyn away away with me my poor heart is breaking for you take my dreams with thee Away away my Carolyn away away with me away to my lonliness and emptiness you leave Away away my valintine away away with thee as long as time is ticking your memory will always be Away away my Carolyn away away with me you'll allways be my truest love as long as you shall be (Sorry soupers Carolyn Devonshire is out of town but in the intrest of keeping things moving I took the liberty of creating this piece. I think she'll be so surprised. and all you love lorn soupers out there. this does'nt mean that there is any thing going on between us were just friends. mean while who do I pass this too. Vince Suzadail Jr. and Sandra Hudson should be ready for the chalenge. GO!)

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/13/2009 8:30:00 PM

Hope Carolyn is not away to long. God Bless Phyl

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/31/2009 1:56:00 PM

i love your work John and this is beautiful--charma

James Peranteau

Date: 7/30/2009 3:28:00 PM

John,..this here is a great write TY for sharing it with us ! And what you wrote in the mail is just fine with me,...I erased the poem because I thought it was a bit to drab. But if it suits you fine I have no doubt with your poetry that it will go well with all our poetic friends ! And you are a great poet for sure ! ! have a wonderful day my friend ! james

John Freeman

Date: 7/29/2009 5:31:00 PM

Hi, John thanks for comments today, I've also enjoyed this poem, you certainly had a good subject matter.Lol, Sincerely Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/29/2009 9:50:00 AM

Home again, home again, lickety split! Too late, I fear, your target to hit. But we shall collaborate sometime, John. This is such a sweet poem. Thank you for sharing it! Love, Carolyn

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/28/2009 6:54:00 PM

John, in comment to what you said, I am glad that you chose me to write something out of my arena, spread my wings right? There is more to the creative world than love and spice, so again thank you.