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Mournfully, My Heart Bleeds

I've written of great longing while my teardrops flare Rhyming lines of sorrow that were nested in my mind Tomes of poetry that exposed the depth of my despair Now, my heart lies withered; to its fate I am resigned. My sonnets are all testaments to the love, now haunted, decaying on yellowed pages, they make my heart bleed. It languishes with pitiful sighs, ignored and unwanted like my dust-laden poetry that I will never again read. Verses were woven tapestries, a lovingly stitched story, Remnants of us left threadbare, colors dull and faded. Time cannot repair moldered love to it's former glory. Ours lies buried in a grave; rotting because it's jaded. Love spills its final drop as I gasp for another breath. From this mortal wound, my afflicted soul is bereaving. I've one last poem to pen, in refrain before my death about the broken part of me, still mournfully grieving. September 22, 2020 Quatrain Writing Challenge - Decay Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 10/17/2020 1:24:00 AM
I always learn when I read good poetry and your poem teaches me a lot! so well done!! beautiful!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/9/2020 6:57:00 PM
That's a very nice compliment, Krish. Thank you so much.
Date: 10/15/2020 10:43:00 PM
Captivating piece dear Jenna..I love the last two lines, ~~~ "I've one last poem to pen, in refrain before my death about the broken part of me, still mournfully grieving."
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/9/2020 6:58:00 PM
Thank you for the generous comment, JC. I'm glad you pointed out something you especially liked.
Date: 10/14/2020 6:17:00 AM
A haunting write Jenna. Nicely penned! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/15/2020 4:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda.
Date: 10/12/2020 12:08:00 PM
So great to see this climbing to the top of best new poems Jenna, the accolades will keep coming for this beauty!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 9:47:00 PM
Oh, I always forget to look at that list so thanks, John. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: 10/9/2020 9:57:00 AM
A very heartfelt write, Jenna. The title of your poem brought me here. :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 9:44:00 PM
I'm glad you read it, Angela...Thank you for commenting.
Date: 10/8/2020 11:33:00 AM
I guess I missed this jewel earlier this month, but was drawn to it by the powerful excerpt you entered in Greg's contest. Wow, this one has a double punch - the impact of reading a poet's final words, plus the sorrow of all the written pages of her life so lovingly crafted now languishing away, never to be read or cherished. I'm sure this is many writer's dread, that all their work was for naught. An excellent write and a fave for me, so glad I found this today ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 9:44:00 PM
Thank you, John. Your comments are endearing and I am honored with your comments.
Date: 10/5/2020 6:46:00 AM
Well now. strange, I thought I left a comment on this one, congrats Jenna on a nice win! You know it's good when the contest sponsor faves it. Few write as you do, I'm faving this one too!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/5/2020 5:08:00 PM
You may have, John. Weird glitches in the soup pot. Thanks for commenting and faving.
Date: 9/30/2020 5:47:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 5:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/29/2020 9:21:00 PM
Our poetry does tend to paint our life, great write, Jenna. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:56:00 AM
Yes, Eve, it certainly does. Thank you.
Date: 9/29/2020 3:11:00 PM
Jenna, you are the master of painting in vibrant pain. Beautiful, beautiful expression. Always readers sense your heart in everything you submit. A well acquired First Place Win is yours, my dear. Huge Congratulations..!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:56:00 AM
Your words are so encouraging, Sigrid. Thank you so much for you congratulations.
Date: 9/29/2020 1:45:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:55:00 AM
Thanks so much for honoring my write with a placement, Constance.
Date: 9/29/2020 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" I love your line, "Verses were woven tapestries, lovingly stitched in ink," So true. Enjoy your win..................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:54:00 AM
I just love it when something specific is pointed out. Thank you, Paula!
Date: 9/29/2020 9:54:00 AM
Very nicely done with expressive wording. Congratulations on the win Jenna! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:53:00 AM
Thanks for the many supportive comments you leave for me, Linda.
Date: 9/24/2020 5:38:00 AM
Beautifully sad verses of decay...emotions bleed aptly in grief...a talented write, as always, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 6:47:00 AM
Your thoughts are so very kind. Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 9/24/2020 2:50:00 AM
Beautifully penned words of lost love, Jenna, deep with emotion. Your poetry is amazing my friend. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 5:11:00 AM
Good morning, John, and I thank you for your generous remarks. They're truly appreciated.
Date: 9/23/2020 11:15:00 PM
Sad and deep, Constance will love this:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 5:10:00 AM
Thank you for reading and leaving your kind comments, Jo.
Date: 9/23/2020 8:34:00 PM
Your gifted pen weeps such beautiful sadness upon the page, Jenna. Dramatic despair laid bare in the depth and breadth of exquisite poignant imagery. Gorgeous poetry! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 5:09:00 AM
I am delighted by your awesome thoughts, Susan. Thank you so very sincerely.
Date: 9/23/2020 12:09:00 PM
You have seamlessly blended elements of poetry into your grieving, heartbreaking write, Jenna. Really nicely done. Best wishes for the contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 5:09:00 AM
Thanks so much for such wonderful comments, Sam.
Date: 9/23/2020 10:55:00 AM
I like your take on the contest Jenna,your love lies buried in a grave very apt for when a relationship is dead:-( hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 5:08:00 AM
Thanks very much, Jan. Only memories dig itup.
Date: 9/23/2020 10:15:00 AM
- A heartbreaking poem, Jenna - Still with beautiful lines ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/23/2020 7:18:00 AM
A verse full of sadness Jenna, of a love that was and is no more, great take on the contest theme and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2020 5:07:00 AM
I think I missed a day somewhere between here and there, but thanks for leaving your usual fine comments, Tom.

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