Joanna Daniel Poet Pleiades

Mountains

Majestic mounts tower 
    mightily, like a king,
        Mesmerising poets'
minds with their grand power,
    Making them gladly sing
        moving songs 'bout sunset's
            magic, seen on summits.


04/20/17

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Alfred Berggren July 6, 2017 at 9:31 AM Words match the mountain picture so well. Can't help wondering what mountain peak this is.

Heidi Sands May 7, 2017 at 9:03 AM Nice one Jo Daniel. I love the mountains. I often write about the scenes where I live and do oil paintings of them too. :)

Mark Martin May 1, 2017 at 7:56 AM Great Pleiades on mountains Jo. Congratulations! :-)

Sandra Haight April 29, 2017 at 2:51 PM A lovely Pleiades, Jo. Yes, those inspirational mountains so often move our Muse. Well done, and congratulations on your first place win! 7 Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman April 28, 2017 at 8:06 PM I like how you linked the mountains to poetry. It's so true. Great descriptive work! Congrats on your 1st place win, Jo! Blessings, Kim Joanna Daniel April 29, 2017 at 7:29 AM Thank you, Kim:) all glory be to God alone:):)

Anisha Dutta April 27, 2017 at 8:39 PM Congrats Jo to win on your wonderful poem

Constance La France April 24, 2017 at 5:48 PM Jo, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win, A7 ~

Nette Onclaud April 24, 2017 at 4:28 PM a majestic work that surely deserves a big congrats, jo... huggs

Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2017 at 5:36 AM I have another M for you Jo, this poem is Magnificent! I didn't even realize it was a Pleiades! Brilliantly created! 7 ; )

White Wolf April 24, 2017 at 12:15 AM Congrats on your win, Jo! I knew this would do well.

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2017 at 8:35 PM this is wonderfully done for that contest. I bet it scored higher than mine and see it won obviously. Congratulations.

Emile Pinet April 23, 2017 at 5:35 PM Your expressive and descriptive words sound good, and paint a many colored canvas of sights and sounds that the reader can relate to. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2017 at 2:11 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith April 23, 2017 at 9:55 AM Beautiful tribute to true majesty, congratulations Jo...

Sushma A. Singh April 23, 2017 at 9:08 AM Lovely! Congrats, Jo!

Agnes Krampe April 23, 2017 at 7:24 AM Congrats on your win, Jo - love how you incorporated rhyme.

Kim Rodrigues April 23, 2017 at 6:54 AM Congrats, Jo!

John Michaels April 23, 2017 at 2:53 AM Glorious imagery, Jo. Especially liked the "sunset's magic"... Congratulations on First Place! Regards, John.

Sushma A. Singh April 22, 2017 at 11:32 PM Lovely! Congrats, Jo!

Demetrios Trifiatis April 22, 2017 at 2:59 PM Miraculous, my dearest sister, Jo! A 7! Hugs

Lin Lane April 21, 2017 at 8:20 AM A grand write for the majesty of mountains. I do miss seeing them now that I've moved back South.

White Wolf April 21, 2017 at 12:43 AM Wow! Jo! You have done a wonderful job here! Really well done! GL

Chris Green April 20, 2017 at 12:02 PM This was gorgeous Jo. I like how you brought poetry into this wonderful mountain vista. Both are so beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2017 at 11:57 AM - Beautifully written, Jo - Good luck in the contest - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)