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Her huge boobies he longed to discover - Vast mountains, quite unlike any other He undid her bra strap She gave him a big slap Said hands off, or I’ll tell my big brother! Inspired by but not for mountains contest 07~11~16

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Date: 7/16/2016 3:48:00 PM
Very unexpected great write x
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Date: 7/17/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thanks Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/15/2016 5:43:00 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/15/2016 5:47:00 PM
Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/15/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thanks for the laugh, Jan:) Hope they were not silicone modified ones! hugs // paul
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Date: 7/15/2016 5:47:00 PM
LOL Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/14/2016 1:04:00 PM
Definitely a different take - good luck
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Date: 7/14/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thanks Dave but its not for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/12/2016 8:45:00 AM
enter it, enter it. hahaha
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:52:00 AM
As if lol, and get yet another N/A to my growing collection lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/12/2016 8:00:00 AM
Real to life poetry. Good on you. We live in a real world but does not mean we can't smile. In fact we need to. Thanks for comment on my blog re poetry in schools. regards David in NZ.
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/12/2016 5:45:00 AM
Hilarious dear, Jan! Loved the spirit behind it! A seven!
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Date: 7/12/2016 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/12/2016 1:05:00 AM
Jan I love that you can cross the line...its fun on our side..:)..just ask Jean!
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Date: 7/12/2016 4:32:00 AM
LOL James I see Jean was writing on a similar theme :-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 10:11:00 PM
You are so funny!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/11/2016 10:14:00 PM
So are you I love your humour too lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 6:29:00 PM
This made me chuckle! Thanks for your feedback and also for your comment - I made the correction.
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Date: 7/11/2016 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Matthew I had fun with this poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 5:48:00 PM
I enjoy the humor. Why don't you choose for contest? Love
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:51:00 PM
The sponsor doesn't enjoy my style or my humour so I will never put my poems in the contests but I do write and still post the poems if the theme takes my attention and I can write a fun poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 5:45:00 PM
ah but one day, I shall visit Twin Peaks!!! Hilarious!
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:50:00 PM
LOL:-) I wrote another version but this one is much better lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 4:48:00 PM
Crikey I just experienced a deja vu moment. I'm so sure I've been there before. ; )
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:49:00 PM
LOL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 4:42:00 PM
Hi Jan, This is so hilarious and very creative-7:-)
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thanks Alexis when I saw the contest I was inspired to write but of course I won't submit it lol :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 4:24:00 PM
Wahhaaha..lol: )..Very sweet you are Jan.
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:25:00 PM
I had fun with the theme of course its not for the contest lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 1:51:00 PM
Jan, lol this is do funny and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 7/11/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thanks Constance its not for the contest of course but inspired by it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 11:50:00 AM
That is an amazing SNAP, as I have not being looking at others' poems yet today Jan. Your's are quite impressive in comparison to mine.
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Date: 7/11/2016 12:08:00 PM
Isn't it amazing the co incidence jean - i was on the bus going into town when I read yours and my mouth dropped open as we are on the same wavelength lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 11:17:00 AM
She sounds like a bit of a tease, he wanted to just have a squeeze, should let him have his way, because maybe one day, she'll find that they hang past her knees. Saucy write, Jan, Viv x
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Date: 7/11/2016 12:08:00 PM
ha ha ha jean and Viv - Viv you should post that gem lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/11/2016 11:52:00 AM
An old IRA boss wanted his wife done away with here. The hit man reported back that the hit had been successful, as he had shot her beneath her right breast. The boss replied "I told you to kill her...not kneecap her!!"
Date: 7/11/2016 11:05:00 AM
lol....hill-arious Jan !!!
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Date: 7/11/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 8:26:00 AM
Mountains, they always want to climb. And then they desire for us to do the pole dance. Men! ttfn ~ H
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Date: 7/11/2016 12:10:00 PM
LOL H great comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/11/2016 8:24:00 AM
Haha and never again will a mountain be just a mountain anymore! :)
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Date: 7/11/2016 12:10:00 PM
LOL Cas:-) hugs Jan xx