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Mountain

MOUNTAIN I used to be stable, dependable, granite; a mountain holds an echo like a lover’s kiss. Once holy parts of me are crumbling away, eroded by betrayal ~ that shifting precipice, integrity ~ that landslide, my honesty. ? How long does it take for a mountain to become a boulder? ? Geologists know the answer but you don’t care, you have a pickaxe ? and the desire for security. If a woman asks you to give up your mountain-ness, no matter what she needs the rocks for, in exchange for her love, refuse indignantly; it is not a fair trade.

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Date: 7/22/2016 3:22:00 PM
Congrats well written great poem x
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Date: 7/21/2016 2:09:00 PM
Congrats Phil both for your form and poem! Very unique!
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Date: 7/19/2016 10:57:00 AM
Well done on the shape, Phil...skat
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Date: 7/18/2016 3:18:00 PM
A poem to think about......Congratulations on your trophy win
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Phil Capitano
Date: 7/19/2016 6:49:00 AM
Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting, I was overwhelmed by the love and support I have received over this poem and others. Namaste.
Date: 7/18/2016 12:21:00 PM
Enjoyed! Congratulations
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Date: 7/18/2016 11:16:00 AM
I like this form and mountains offer so many to us writers! Congrats on your win :) Sunita
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Date: 7/18/2016 8:39:00 AM
Such a different and palpable view of "mountains"!This poem bowls me over,very well written Phil!
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Date: 7/18/2016 8:35:00 AM
Congrats Phil, I told you you were a top poet Julia is a very demanding judge, so this one means something, well done!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 7/19/2016 6:52:00 AM
Truly I appreciate all the love and support this community of poets has shown me and I now feel at home to express myself openly. Your continued support means everything to me. Peace and love.
Date: 7/18/2016 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Phil, on your podium Third Place win for your 'mountain' poem. A great visual and metaphorical presentation! 7 Sandra
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Date: 7/18/2016 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations Phil, a most deserving effort...
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Date: 7/18/2016 4:25:00 AM
Congrats well done great poem x
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Date: 7/18/2016 1:41:00 AM
A marvellous take on the theme, Phil, well crafted and thought provoking. Congrats! Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/18/2016 12:30:00 AM
A very unique take on the theme, giving you third place in my contest. Congratulations, Phil!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 7/19/2016 6:55:00 AM
Thanks for accepting me into your contest, your community and ultimately your heart. This means so much to me. Namaste.
Date: 5/19/2016 8:43:00 PM
I LOVE IT!!!! FAVE. Thanks for telling me it was here.
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Date: 5/19/2016 9:43:00 AM
Wonderful mountain-verse. Both form and content are admirable. Congrat.
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