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Mother Told Me Not To Go Out At Night

A child whose curiosity shined Who naive, did not know of such downfall Mother always told him to stay home at night Yet, the curiosity failed to listen to such warning A night came, where mother was asleep A chance to explore the depths of night Out the doors he went To a world all too different A man of 40 watched him His every move His every sound His every being A grin only too sinister crept upon his face A thought too evil made him act As he followed the child Slowly, following The child unaware of such things happening Until he heard a faint whisper "Oh little boy" Despair filled the mind of the child His footsteps sped up His heart racing His eyes watering Home was far away The man behind him catching up The faint sound of his whisper filled dread in the boy "Little boy come play with me" Sped up footsteps turned to running His heart's speed almost crashing Eyes watering turned to cries of help Home was close The faint whisper only too familiar "Little boy, why are you running?" The man's voice cracked and deep His breath of cigar The smell of alcohol filled the boy's nose The boy almost fainted of fear Yet, home was there On the porch he went Tried to open the door Locked Once again, he tried Locked The man approaching The sinister smile on his face The whisper only to familar, spoke again "Little boy, you are making me very angry" Fear filled the boy Dread consumed the boy Despair being the boy The man closer Too close So close The smell of alcohol stronger The breath of cigar near The little boy closed his eyes waiting for what's about to come The whisper again spoke "Little boy, you are now mine" 10/02/2016 (Scare Me Good Poetry Contest)

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Date: 10/4/2016 7:49:00 PM
Mary r, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/3/2016 4:32:00 AM
Mary R., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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