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Seasons quarterly change I love the transition with wild temperature contrasts from hot sizzling sunshine to freezing cold such bliss! Seasons quarterly change new growth appears on trees beautiful flowers start blooming nature rejuvenates days get longer each spring Seasons quarterly change annual vacation on a glorious golden beach enjoy time outdoors in scorching sunshine summer seasons quarterly change foliage starts to fall twirling leaves of red and orange we warm by the fire as nights get colder autumn Seasons quarterly change some bitterly cold days flurries of snowflakes start falling kids build big snowmen and dress warmly in winter Checked with how many syllables each stanza 2,4,6,8,6,4.2 Heptastich Poetry Contest Sponsored by William Kekaula 05/20/21

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Date: 5/30/2021 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful, Jan: I never tire of poems about nature. The illustration is gorgeous. And well done on the Hepastich, too, SuZ
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Date: 5/25/2021 5:31:00 PM
I really like this one, Jan. it’s a pity more people don’t pay attention to our beautiful earth. Best of luck
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Date: 5/22/2021 6:41:00 PM
Hello Jan ... every day of the year there is something beautiful in nature. We just have to see it as much - nice verse indeed Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 5/22/2021 12:37:00 PM
Wonderful poem Jan...All the best for the contest....hugs, Shonima
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Date: 5/22/2021 4:00:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, vividly written Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2021 6:27:00 PM
You are a beautiful poet expressing yourself, and there is no room for negativity on this site dear friend, I hope you ignore ignorant ones, its not worth it, Stay beautiful and strong, keep penning what your heart desires.
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Date: 5/21/2021 5:34:00 PM
Hi jan.you even make winter sound inviting.good luck in competition.take care, Simon
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Date: 5/21/2021 11:14:00 AM
Highlights of each season are masterfully evoked here in lovely array, Jan. Best wishes for the contest. hugs, Evelyn
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Date: 5/21/2021 2:30:00 PM
Thanks Evelyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/21/2021 10:48:00 AM
An excellent explanation of why Native Americans consider "4" the sacred number instead of "3"! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/21/2021 2:29:00 PM
thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/21/2021 8:43:00 AM
Admire the way you touched eloquently on each season, Jan. Maybe you'll get to spend some of the coming summer on a "glorious golden beach." Best wishes in William's fun contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2021 2:27:00 PM
thanks Carolyn i didn't know what to write about and then got the idea for seasons so thought i would try it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/21/2021 7:25:00 AM
The beautiful colors of the seasons , each with its own temperature change, Lovely write Jan, best wishes
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Date: 5/21/2021 6:17:00 AM
This is very lovely Jan. I love the four seasons and all that comes with them. I had to smile at your ending thinking of some of the cute and funny snowman I have seen built by playful children and adults. I loved this! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2021 2:26:00 PM
lol yes i have seen some hilarious pictures of snowmen and where the carrot is placed can be so funny lol:-) thanks Connie:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/21/2021 2:09:00 AM
Your imagery is perfect. Seasons come and go and we can expect more of the same. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/21/2021 4:39:00 AM
thanks Victor:-) hope the weather is good with you:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/20/2021 10:58:00 PM
A very beautiful poem on Seasons. Wish you all the best!
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Date: 5/21/2021 4:38:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/20/2021 6:01:00 PM
Love this four season poem. It does not know what it want to do here. It was 30 C for two days and down to 2C with snow today. Need some moderation for sure so had to move my flower pots on the deck or lose them. Hope all is well your way. love phyl
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Date: 5/21/2021 4:38:00 AM
thanks Phyl, we sometimes get 4 seasons in a day here the temperature and conditions can vary so much on our little Island:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/20/2021 5:28:00 PM
Hey Jan, I like this a lot. I don’t know if I’ll ever ‘get’ non rhyme, but if I do, I suspect that this poem will have helped me on that journey. Thanks for the education. Terry
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Date: 5/21/2021 4:37:00 AM
I much prefer rhyme especially limericks lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/20/2021 4:34:00 PM
WoW! Jan, What a well-written and splendid write that showcased each season. Best wishes in the contest. Great job. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/20/2021 4:54:00 PM
thanks Alexis i dont think ive tried this form before, hope you are well, have been manically busy with exam assessment support but it ends next Thursday and i will have more time for soup:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/20/2021 1:50:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem traversing through the seasons. So well done, Jan, in this hard to execute form!
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Date: 5/20/2021 2:54:00 PM
It was a fun challenge, thanks Vijay
Date: 5/20/2021 1:24:00 PM
some beautiful imagery, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 5/20/2021 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx