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Mother and Children

mother children strung out behind notes in motion an older man watches them run heart singing and running after

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/20/2015 10:45:00 AM
Wow great way u captured the scene in poetic musical notes! And the oldie nostalgic about his sprinting days perhaps. Says much in brevity. Nice to read frm u again.
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Date: 8/19/2015 9:35:00 PM
I LOVE THIS!!! You captured a moment and that is what haiku and tanka both are good at!
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