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''Mother''

Memories drifting of many r e c o l l e c t i o n s - Marvelous home cooked meals, m o m e n t s - just us talking, meadows GREEN where we strolled. Mom, I weep as I pass, mazes of g r a v e s in rows. _____________________ April 19, 2017 Pleiades Verse/"Mother" Copyright Protected, ID 893622 Pleiades M Kim Merryman First Place

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Date: 5/1/2017 8:07:00 AM
Well written bw! Congratulations on your well deserved win! :-)
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Date: 4/28/2017 7:53:00 PM
This brought back memories of my mom. Beautifully written, Constance! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 4/23/2017 2:12:00 PM
- A great poem on the letter "M" - Congratulations on your winning poem, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2017 11:37:00 AM
Nicely done, Constance, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 4/23/2017 10:05:00 AM
Touching memories BW.
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Date: 4/23/2017 9:16:00 AM
Touching and beautiful, Constance, congratulations on a well deserved win:) a 7:)
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Date: 4/23/2017 6:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance. Sad and beautiful.
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Date: 4/23/2017 6:50:00 AM
Constance, both lovely and sad! Congrats!
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Date: 4/23/2017 2:48:00 AM
Emotional piece, well-written. Experiences with a loved one, even what some would consider to be very "ordinary", become all the more precious when they are no longer with us. Congratulations on your First Place win! Regards, John.
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Date: 4/19/2017 9:32:00 AM
Sadness written amidst wonderful memories. Really beautiful my friend.
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Date: 4/19/2017 2:29:00 AM
A sad verse holding such grief. Bless you. #7
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Date: 4/19/2017 1:42:00 AM
A moving piece, Constance! You make these look easy! Best of luck to you.
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