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Mother

She saw ahead of me, She knew I'll traverse a sea, She could read me like a book, She understood my every look, She always said that perception is the key. She saw the treasure in my chamber, She awakened me from my slumber, She held my hand across the bridge, She told me how to go up the ridge, She prayed away the siege. She said life has its days of gloom, But steadfast hope will chauffeur bloom, She aided me to stretch out my rope as I ascended on hope, She showed me how to enlarge my room. She accompanied me on my sojourn, She told me to see beyond the midnight region, She told me to colour my day as I walk through recalcitrant hay, Anticipating light on the way. She told me to advance on as she watched, I climbed up, turned and looked, She was gone, Even now I still mourn, When I'm trouble hooked, I remember the insightful meals she cooked. March 19, 2023. Writing Challenge - "M" Words - Poetry Contest, Constance La France.

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Date: 3/27/2023 8:49:00 AM
Thompson, congratulations on your Honorable Mention in my Writing Challenge - 'M' Words, a very nice write, so sorry for the delay in commenting, blessings
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Date: 3/27/2023 9:00:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. I'm honoured.
Date: 3/22/2023 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win , Thomson Courage, You have done well
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Date: 3/22/2023 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Alfonso. It's an honour.
Date: 3/22/2023 3:47:00 AM
Very rich writing on the theme: Mother. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/22/2023 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. I'm honoured.
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Date: 3/22/2023 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. I'm honoured.
Date: 3/21/2023 11:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely mother poem, Thompson :) -
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Date: 3/22/2023 9:52:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. It's an honour.
Date: 3/21/2023 7:35:00 AM
Love this insightful and delicious poem about your mother Thompson, and her encouraging words for you. Congratulations ! :)
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Date: 3/22/2023 9:52:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. I'm honoured.

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