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Ah mother, how serene you look In your resting place. I blink back my tears as I look down on your frail body. If only you can understand what I feel for you, there's nothing I wouldn't do to see you healthy and strong, to see your limbs full, to watch you walk alone, to see you eat a hearty meal. Alas it is not to be. Cruel father time will take his toll, and your strength will recede more and more, like a wave that strikes the rocks only to rise and fall. Yet I shall never forget I was born in your womb. You are my life, I owe you much. Why didn't I die Instead of you? Forever we'll remain, forever we'll soar. 17 September 2021 ''M'' Contest, New Poems Only - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/22/2021 2:36:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:26:00 AM
Wow victor i'm so glad you won, so truly deserved, what an amazing son! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/19/2021 11:39:00 PM
You are such a sweet and good son, Victor. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/19/2021 8:09:00 PM
A song of love, such felt love can go no deeper in the heart and soul. A good son. That is a blessing to a mom. Oxo lovely expression
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:11:00 PM
such a touching piece Victor, hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/19/2021 11:04:00 AM
Beautiful, Victor. You mention in your tribute to Carolyn that you had to learn how to write. I don't really believe that. Poetry has always been inside you.
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:47:00 AM
Sweet and poignant write, Victor:)
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Date: 9/18/2021 9:50:00 PM
From the heart! Good luck for the contest!
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Date: 9/18/2021 3:34:00 PM
Victor, your touching ode to your mother, is a beautiful work of poetry; the essence of your poem may be summed up in the final two lines. Wonderfully passionate writing, as well as an intense devotion that whips up the soul.
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Date: 9/18/2021 12:50:00 PM
I hope my mom found a hearty buffet the second her soul found heaven. I love the line about “cruel father time.”
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Date: 9/18/2021 11:47:00 AM
Victor, your touching tribute to your mother is beautiful one. There is no bond like the one between mother and child-it's so special. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/18/2021 6:58:00 AM
WoW! Victor, This is such a moving tribute to your dear mother. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis
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Date: 9/18/2021 6:48:00 AM
Great tribute to your mother, Father Time does take a toll ... Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/18/2021 6:21:00 AM
Your two ending lines spell the essence of your poem for me, Victor. Wonderfully emotive write and a special tribute that tugs the heart. Win BIG!
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Date: 9/18/2021 3:54:00 AM
Oh my... What a LOVELY tribute to your dear mom Victor... No one can replace the role of parents and the love showered unto us by them... Best wishes... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/18/2021 2:28:00 AM
That’s a wonderful tribute Victor, a mother’s love is refined, love of the purest kind… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 9/17/2021 10:56:00 PM
We owe them so much Victor, lovely tribute. Tom
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Date: 9/17/2021 10:46:00 PM
Aww such a lovely tribute to mother Victor, good luck in the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/17/2021 10:04:00 PM
Father time does take a toll, it's hard to say goodbye to loved ones. yet, they forever live in memories...Delice
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