Mosquitos

Most annoying bugs are mosquitos They're attracted to stinky body odour Not that you stink But I might turn to drink Your smell really can't be ignored

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/23/2021 9:27:00 AM

So that's where we've being going wrong, I'm heading for a soak in the bath lol. Tom

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/23/2021 10:07:00 AM

Good thing the smell isn't transferred through P-Soup!!! Yucky poo! LOL

Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/23/2021 7:44:00 AM

I dunno, my wife and I can be sitting outside and the mosquitoes are all over me and they leave her alone. LOL, do you think is could be a sweet smell. Thank You for sharing your poem!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/23/2021 8:03:00 AM

Yes... it's a lady thing! Us guys are stinky most of the time like cutting down trees and stuff! LOL