Mortal Becoming Immortal


The immortal, invisible King dwells
in the light to which no man can draw near 
But by God's grace immense, He did appear 
as a man to die on the cross that tells 
of His great love for us. We the mortals 
will put on immortality. No fear 
we have of death, as long as we live here.
Such infinite love has no parallels.

Yet, men try foolishly to reduce God's
immortality to mortal likeness 
of man, birds, beasts and creeping things, in vain;
With God, the creature is being at odds,
Therefore, God too gave up man to vileness,
But, now we're reconciled; Christ's death, our gain.

02/28/17



Rhyme scheme: abbaabba cdecde (10 syllables each line)
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Lindley Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 6:55 AM
EXCEPTIONAL SONNET , WITH GRACE, BEAUTY, TRUTH AND DEPTH. Truth and beauty matching the Light therein shown! A gem, a true gem!a7
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 8:35 PM
Well penned Jo. Congrats.
La France Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Jo congratulations on your win in my contest ~
Daniel Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 9:42 AM
Thank you, Constance:) to God be all glory:)
Callus Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Christ's love and death, together with our faith are guarantees to an immortal afterlife, Jo. Well done with this lovely and meaningful poem... a tricky sonnet which you executed with a capable pen. #7 Regards // paul
Canerdy Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Your sonnet--a 7 for sure--tells the truth! Janice
Nusker Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Wow this is really impressive and I love the rhyme scheme as well.
Godwin Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 8:14 PM
I am impressed and enjoyed it twice. All the best, all the days ... CayCay
Ball Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 3:50 AM
Absolutely wonderful Jo. You speak The Truth with great conviction. Loved this. It's a keeper. From 1 to 7 this is a 10 in my book. God Bless, JB
Singh Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Your poems speak volumes of your spiritual strength Good Luck for the contest, Jo!
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