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Morning Snow

The first snow of the season has fallen silently Blanketing the ground with a lovely white quilt, Wafting here and there into gentle drifts Shrouding all outdoors in an eerie silence. The birds are silent on their frozen limbs, Feathers fluffed against the chilly breezes. The chattering squirrels have all disappeared Cuddling tightly in their fragile leafy nests. Watchful deer forage in an adjoining meadow, While yearlings frolic in newly discovered delight. Feral cats confused by the unexpected change Take cover ‘neath some lingering piles of brush. A heavily clad youngster who lives across the way Will soon come by with his long-handled shovel To clean off my car and clear the driveway, Traffic will resume; soon all will return to normal. FIFTH PLACE December 3, 2020 Winter Contest sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 1/3/2021 9:12:00 AM
Love the imagery :) Congratulations on the win LM! :) Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/3/2021 9:40:00 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 1/3/2021 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations L.! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 75 poems entered and yet your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placing, this was a very difficult contest to judge, but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/3/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Emile. I do feel very honored!
Date: 1/3/2021 7:59:00 AM
Beautiful Poem of Winter, Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/3/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Elaine.
Date: 12/3/2020 11:09:00 AM
Hello L. Milton Hankins, yes when it snows during the evening. A big clean up begins the next day. Enjoy your snow. The snow where I live is melting. enjoy yor day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2020 10:47:00 AM
Hello L. Milton Hankins, Yes the snow does change the complexion of the scenery on the ground. Yes the animals respond to the change very well.Enjoy your day my friend.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/3/2020 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene. It always amazes me how a new, crisp coat of snow on the ground can totally change the complexion of almost everything. I love how the animals respond to it.

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