Morning Snow

The first snow of the season has fallen silently
Blanketing the ground with a lovely white quilt,
Wafting here and there into gentle drifts
Shrouding all outdoors in an eerie silence.

The birds are silent on their frozen limbs,
Feathers fluffed against the chilly breezes.
The chattering squirrels have all disappeared
Cuddling tightly in their fragile leafy nests.

Watchful deer forage in an adjoining meadow,
While yearlings frolic in newly discovered delight.
Feral cats confused by the unexpected change
Take cover ‘neath some lingering piles of brush.

A heavily clad youngster who lives across the way
Will soon come by with his long-handled shovel
To clean off my car and clear the driveway,
Traffic will resume; soon all will return to normal.

FIFTH PLACE
December 3, 2020
Winter Contest
sponsored by Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Fowler Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Love the imagery :) Congratulations on the win LM! :) Linda
Hankins Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations L.! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 75 poems entered and yet your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placing, this was a very difficult contest to judge, but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Thanks so much, Emile. I do feel very honored!
George   Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Beautiful Poem of Winter, Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine
Hankins Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Thanks so much, Elaine.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 11:09 AM
Hello L. Milton Hankins, yes when it snows during the evening. A big clean up begins the next day. Enjoy your snow. The snow where I live is melting. enjoy yor day my friend.
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December 4, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Hello L. Milton Hankins, Yes the snow does change the complexion of the scenery on the ground. Yes the animals respond to the change very well.Enjoy your day my friend.
Hankins Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, Darlene. It always amazes me how a new, crisp coat of snow on the ground can totally change the complexion of almost everything. I love how the animals respond to it.
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