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Morning Rain

morning rain beats against my window -- my warm bed 11/26/13

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Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/18/2020 6:51:00 AM

What a fantastic way to wake up, and a lovely reason to stay in bed. I Do love Haiku, and yours is beautiful. JC Hawkens

Paul Callus

Date: 3/17/2014 11:00:00 AM

enjoying the contrast...paul

Peter Dome

Date: 3/16/2014 7:04:00 PM

I love little visual gems like this.such a cosey feel. very well done.thank you for sharing. take care best wishes. Pete.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2014 10:58:00 PM

I see you commenting around. But where are your new poems? Good to know you are back, dear.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/1/2014 6:06:00 PM

Exceptional... Enjoyed... Verlena

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/22/2014 11:53:00 PM

Good use of just a few words. I haven't seen you here in a while. How have you been?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2014 3:48:00 PM

I love haiku with this kind of contrast shown. WELL done.

Elaine George

Date: 2/22/2014 11:10:00 AM

Hi Kim, This is an EXCEPTIONALl Haku!! This goes to my fav's. Also,I wish to thank you for saving my poem 'In the Autumn of my Life", to your fav's. Elaine George

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2014 3:16:00 PM

I like the haiku very much...<3 Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2014 8:36:00 PM

Kim, the bed sounds great.. i also love morning rain...hugs.. Linda

Peter Dome

Date: 1/11/2014 2:27:00 PM

Very nice well done. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2014 12:26:00 PM

- HAPPY NEW YEAR 2014, KIM !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/31/2013 4:15:00 PM

perfectly formed haiku! Happy New Year my friend Light & Love

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/16/2013 6:34:00 PM

you've managed to convey such coziness in just a few words - nice one!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2013 12:08:00 PM

- Such days, it's only to be under the covers ...... watching the raindrops on the window - Well done, Kim. - I wish you and everyone you love a enjoyable Christmas. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)