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Morning Martyrs

Their fiery blossoms swayed against the sky
In breezy weather and Mama and I
played games, describing how
the long, gold-tipped pistils wrote,
on air, sweeping pollen poems.
No eye that saw could help but read.
Their blooms were red against the green,
And in the early morning wet we deemed
We saw the blood of homegrown heroes,
Who died for duty, deftly limned ---
Dreams to occupy two minds
That loved the moves, in wind,
Of red hibiscus past their primes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Woods Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 3:52 AM
Thank you for sharing this powerful poem reading! So full of nostalgia and descriptive prose. Xo
La France Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 6:30 AM
Leo, welcome to the Poetrysoup. I think your poem is splendid. I invite you to enter my ongoing contest called, For(Four)Beautiful Birds. I think you would write an amazing poem. If you have any questions, soup mail me~~
Mister Roboto Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 7:18 PM
Nice piece. I lost a buddy today. Gunned down when an Afghan military pilot opened fire during a meeting at Kabul airport over in Iraq. ~JSLambert
Zzzzz Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Quite a moving poem. Inventive and poetic.
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