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Morning Martyrs

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Their fiery blossoms swayed against the sky In breezy weather and Mama and I played games, describing how the long, gold-tipped pistils wrote, on air, sweeping pollen poems. No eye that saw could help but read. Their blooms were red against the green, And in the early morning wet we deemed We saw the blood of homegrown heroes, Who died for duty, deftly limned --- Dreams to occupy two minds That loved the moves, in wind, Of red hibiscus past their primes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/1/2011 6:30:00 AM
Leo, welcome to the Poetrysoup. I think your poem is splendid. I invite you to enter my ongoing contest called, For(Four)Beautiful Birds. I think you would write an amazing poem. If you have any questions, soup mail me~~
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:18:00 PM
Nice piece. I lost a buddy today. Gunned down when an Afghan military pilot opened fire during a meeting at Kabul airport over in Iraq. ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/27/2011 3:08:00 PM
Quite a moving poem. Inventive and poetic.
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