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My sleep is broken with music from my alarm. Morning has broken! I move like a snail, slowly making my way for my must have cup of tea and marmalade on hot toast. M Pleiades Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman 04~19~17

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Mark Martin

Date: 5/1/2017 6:07:00 AM

Great description of a morning ritual! Congratulations on your win Jan! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2017 6:09:00 PM

Many thanks Mark I never miss breakfast but do usually have cereal rather than toast - just a little poetic licence lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/28/2017 8:44:00 PM

A delightful description of your morning, Jan! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2017 2:22:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim I have SUCH fun with the contests and have written 2 for the N one:-) I hope you like the one I choose to enter:-)hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2017 7:25:00 AM

Morning turns golden! Mmm... Congrat, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2017 3:24:00 PM

Oh so true Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 4/24/2017 8:39:00 AM

A light ,savoury write! Congrats, Jan on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thanks Sushma:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2017 2:07:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2017 2:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 4/23/2017 8:23:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2017 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/23/2017 7:37:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Jan. I enjoyed your description of a morning as I am having my morning coffee.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2017 7:58:00 AM

I had porridge and stewed plums with cinnamon this morning with my cuppa I do like to have a variety in the morning:-) hugs jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 4/23/2017 1:50:00 AM

Great stuff, Jan - nice and playful! Congratulations on your high-placed win! Regards, John.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2017 7:57:00 AM

Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Miraj Raha

Date: 4/21/2017 11:43:00 AM

very good Pleiades jan

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2017 1:16:00 PM

Thanks Miraj:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 4/20/2017 4:27:00 PM

Brilliant Pleiades, really enjoyed this Jan, good luck in contest. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 4/20/2017 4:31:00 PM

Thanks Roy :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/20/2017 3:46:00 AM

- A sweet morning, Jan - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/20/2017 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2017 6:38:00 PM

Very nice seven sisters Jan...best wishes

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2017 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/19/2017 4:24:00 PM

wonderful, jan! i love the way you've incorporated all those "m's" so sneakily!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2017 4:26:00 PM

I do enjoy the challenges of these forms and have fun trying to be creative:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/19/2017 1:58:00 PM

Morning how I hate thee...lol...seems lately I'm up before the alarm

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2017 3:21:00 PM

My sleep patterns is totally up the shoot:-( hugs Jan xx

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 4/19/2017 1:49:00 PM

Cool poem! :D-Love Ettie

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2017 3:21:00 PM

Thanks Ettie:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/19/2017 9:04:00 AM

I'd love to share that breakfast with you. It's exactly my kind of morning meal...at about 10ish. A great Pleiades, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2017 11:14:00 AM

I'd love to share breakfast with you in fact there are many souper's I would love to meet :-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 4/19/2017 8:39:00 AM

Now I'm singing "Morning has broken" by Cat Stevens in my mind. :) But I don't mind, I like that song. This was really nice Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2017 8:44:00 AM

I adore that song so much Chris that it's to be played at my funeral! The keyboards were played by Rick Wakeman who lives on our little Island I met him several times in a cafe I worked in. :-) hugs Jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 4/19/2017 8:36:00 AM

A marvellous entry on the pleiades contest, Jan! And good morning to you on the Isle of Man! Best of luck.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2017 8:42:00 AM

Thanks White Wolf:-) It's actually afternoon here so I had my breakfast hours ago:-) hugs Jan xx