moorlands hiku

heather s w a y s beneath the blazing b r e e z e brewing hurt ~ moon-dappled moorlands

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Valsa George

Date: 6/4/2025 11:58:00 PM

Your poems and Hikus are a class by themselves! Kudos....

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/4/2025 4:10:00 AM

This is beautiful and lands just as a haiku/hiku should, with the last line. Lingers after reading. Congratulations on your top placement

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/3/2025 11:29:00 AM

A sensuous and lovely poem! Beautiful images, Ink.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/3/2025 9:48:00 AM

Oh, the British Isles- and sweetened with design, it gets better as you practice IE, I can read these much faster now! Love & peace~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2025 11:28:00 PM

Aha. It IS a win for us both this time. Congrats

Ink Empress
Date: 6/3/2025 3:03:00 AM

Awwn ill read yours soon too! Congrats sweet andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2025 11:25:00 PM

So gorgeous . I especially love the last night. Hope it's a win!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/2/2025 10:48:00 PM

Fantastic imagery in your haiku. Though I prefer your famous longer poems. Loved the moon dappled moorlands.

Ink Empress
Date: 6/3/2025 3:09:00 AM

Awn thank you dear victor, i have some long poems coming up haha. Not many like reading long but you are so kind and generous to give your time to read. Sending you light always