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Moonstones in Artless Skies

It feels like the world has been struck by a plague of pathological lies, where fictional truth seems to sell better, the allure of imitation glistens even brighter, while superficial tongues recite infected mantras, praising slaves of Satan~ singing corpse lullabies. And I can feel my drained soul descending into darkness, as this cathartic sanctuary slowly decays, into odds and ends of incessant numbness. Spikes drive through this splintered ribcage, shackling my life force, to silently bleed in salvation. I feel the scorching iron ore entering my splitting heart, as they watch the crimson flow, mocking my doomed empathy. For kindness is disregarded, in a cynical world that has no mercy, falling into an abyss of tears, awaiting eternal sleep, never to rise to another devil’s trance, whilst bleeding in reckless reckoning. I am the mistreated mistress in misery, stranded in the midst of an abandoned island~ cruising through roaring waves, in desperate hope for butterfly bliss. I trace deadly deeds in bloodstained sea-castles, pleading the lord, to tether the cold walls, that hide all these layers of brokenness. Carvings of chaos on my skin, choreograph a prodigious dance of death, commemorating creased calm, with prophetic songs that have no life. For the coldest breeze still lingers in circles, from the pits of an out-burnt mountain, reluctant to rearrange dried up poison, with their cape of sentiments, in cold refrains and resentment. Yet I question the cosmic Peridots scattered between moonstones in artless skies. How can a poet make the dead seem beautiful again, when musty maggots are the only fillings they would get?

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Date: 2/28/2024 6:52:00 AM
Dear Ms. Ink poetess, I don't know but some how must have missed this emotive and powerful poem of yours. You never cease to amaze this reader with your immense abilities. Blessings to you
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Date: 2/19/2024 10:13:00 AM
I think you answered your own question. You make despair beautiful with your olivine imagery. Poets are the hopeless spelunking for words that ignite despite the darkness. You light a spark with your words.
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Date: 2/9/2024 10:28:00 AM
Such a profound message you have here Ink!!
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Date: 2/4/2024 4:44:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, Such haunting imagery and raw emotional depth. The way you creatively put words together makes me feel the pain, despair, and longing that is both captivating and thought provoking. The words of disillusionment and despair, grappling with the harsh realities of a world consumed superficiality.
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 2/4/2024 4:44:00 AM
Your portrayal of the descent into darkness, and the desire for peace amidst the chaos is incredibly evocative. What a beacon of authenticity in a world that often seeks to drown out the truth. May your words illuminate the hearts of those who are willing to listen and to seek comfort in your amazing poetry. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/3/2024 10:43:00 AM
I Love this, Lit Lit Lit, got goosebumps, Almost got lost in your World!
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Date: 1/11/2024 6:24:00 AM
Ah, such a gorgeous piece! A fave for me, Inky. Congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/11/2024 6:38:00 AM
Ah thank you dear EI i really am grateful that you always appreciate my poems and im also grateful for your fave. And for placing my poem thank you so very much truly
Date: 1/10/2024 9:39:00 PM
"I trace deadly deeds in bloodstained sea-castles, pleading the lord, to tether the cold walls, that hide all these layers of brokenness" - highly poetical, indeed! Congratulations!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/11/2024 6:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much truly for your sincere feedback im grateful truly
Date: 1/10/2024 10:59:00 AM
Wonderful word choice pulls me into the angst of this poem! You have a magic wand in your pen and so beautifully crafted are your poems! Congratulations on another win!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/11/2024 6:38:00 AM
Thank you always for being so supportive truly
Date: 12/30/2023 12:29:00 PM
This is truly beautiful in explaining how most feel in these days, this is what the powers of satan has over people, blessed are the hearts that do not like what they see and seek the power of God's spirit to manifest within to pull one out of this corrupt generation, May God's sent spirit find dwelling unto all which seek
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Date: 12/30/2023 11:27:00 AM
Heck, this is a write one must be careful or have to be painfully torn from like a tongue on a frozen rail. Inkishly Poe, yet your own, including the hmm - you do make Bella Lugosi the unintended hero - the Jux! Surely a powerful analogy - one does question hopelessness - now I'll just point my proverbial arrow below and say DITTO!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/1/2024 10:37:00 PM
What a massive compliment coming from you dear craig, someone well read and and that writes so well, to say i sound a bit like poe, or reminds you of poe truly made me so happy! And flattered. As poe is actually one of my fave poets and i used to read him to sleep. I dont usually read famous poets but poe i used to, thank you soo much for this beautiful feedback im truly honored and grateful
Date: 12/28/2023 4:17:00 PM
I can feel the passion you feel as you write in poetic form of the diseases plaguing humanity. Your imagery and descriptive phases take me deeper into the abyss of evil strangle hold on our throats. It is near impossible to write beautiful poetry as we are drug into the cesspool of liars and deceivers. The darkness can seem inescapable at times, Ink. The Light will overcome, be strong, hold on to the light. Love and Light, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 12/28/2023 7:07:00 AM
Your poetry, dear Ink, emits a seductive melody as well as a profound search for a world tainted by deception, skepticism, and the hideous facts of emotional distress. The imagery used is nothing short of spectacular, and there is much to be said about your poetic soul. Your work exemplifies the compelling charm and beauty it possesses. I am persuaded that your verses represent the zenith of your creative talent every time I read them. However, with each new poetry that I come across, it beats previous works in terms of elegance.
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Date: 12/27/2023 7:16:00 PM
The last stanza is particularily powerful. You truly have inspired a piece of wisdom here. Gems...
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Date: 12/26/2023 6:33:00 PM
The first part I get totally. I listen to the lies. I can't help it. I let my disgust take me to political as it does often. It's like Love, it inspires me to write.
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Date: 12/26/2023 3:23:00 PM
OMG. This is a fantastic view of the debased side of our world. It forces a realistic look at life, but a possible hope of transforming the dead. I had the feeling of being trapped in satanic happenings, yet a determination of change but also frustration. It was very dark. A well written, timely poem. A Fav.
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Date: 12/26/2023 9:35:00 AM
indeed, Ink, you've touched on the reality of today's world in a beautiful way. We live in a world where believing the 'fictional truth' is the norm. I can feel the desperation and anguish one feels in such a deceptive world wondering if words and actions make a difference. I sense some of this poem portrays the reality of your own life of harsh truths, 'musty maggots.' I am saddened knowing someone as beautiful as you had to endure such harshness. Sending you an e-hug! Sara
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Date: 12/26/2023 8:39:00 AM
This poem is so good. The descriptions of what we are going through I'm this world are right on the mark! You have written a brilliant poem here. Very powerful, thought provoking and important. A Fave for me. :)
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Date: 12/26/2023 5:45:00 AM
Oh Empress you are the queen of angst are you not? Your quill portrays a a profound exploration of a world tainted by deception, cynicism, and the harsh realities of emotional pain... A place we have all been.. The vivid and visceral imagery creates a stark portrayal of your perception of the world and the personal struggles you have endured.. I wish you would meet a knight who would save you and take you away from these realms, of which you always bleed about...
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Silent One
Date: 12/26/2023 5:46:00 AM
The closing lines introduce a thought-provoking question about the poet's ability to make the dead seem beautiful... trust me they are not when burning in hell :)).. The juxtaposition of cosmic Peridots and moonstones with the harsh reality of musty maggots and the dead receiving only fillings suggests a reflection on the transformative power of art and poetry in the face of grim truths... Love how your poems are always so emotionally charged.. I know this one will finish first place for sure..
Date: 12/26/2023 5:05:00 AM
Gosh, dear Ink, this blew me away.It's extremely poignant and deeply resonating in so many ways, as you described the cruelties that have been crowned in this dual-faced world as those 'pathological lies' and 'fictional truths' have dethroned humanity..This poem resonates with me on so many levels, as you've so achingly said "I feel the scorching iron ore entering my splitting heart, as they watch the crimson flow, mocking my doomed empathy" And that opening is so powerful too, your alliteration
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/26/2023 5:08:00 AM
and metaphors are extremely glorious here as they shine in their own rhythm, whilst expressing vulnerabilities that the heart has gone through.. "I am the mistreated mistress in misery, stranded in the midst of an abandoned island~ cruising through roaring waves, in desperate hope for butterfly bliss" Just soooo brilliant!! This is sincerely, one of my FAVs from you, I'm sure it's going to be one of the top winners in the contest.. Keep writing and shining always ~
Date: 12/26/2023 5:00:00 AM
I feel the scorching iron ore entering my splitting heart, as they watch the crimson flow, mocking my doomed empathy--cruising through roaring waves, in desperate hope for butterfly bliss--awesome vocabulary, as always, my friend. You painted theme brilliantly.
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Date: 12/26/2023 4:10:00 AM
When I read each of your poem, I feel it is the best and think that you have reached the peak of your artistic expression. But each time I chance to glance upon a new poem, I feel it has excelled the previous one. "I am the mistreated mistress in misery, stranded in the midst of an abandoned island~ cruising through roaring waves, in desperate hope for butterfly bliss." How can one express more powerfully the feeling of desperation in being stranded in a desolate place ! Each stanza is an elegy complete. Into my FAVE. I have not a grain of doubt about the place it is going to have in the contest.
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Date: 12/26/2023 12:12:00 AM
superficial tongues recite infected mantras, drained soul descending into darkness.. shackling my life force, to silently bleed .mmm the emotions running throughout these amazing lines ..the mistreated mistress in misery,.indeed you are..who??? Somebody gonna die aeee .. I bring SPF! protection together!!! Carvings of chaos on my skin,.damn this line!!! I love how u make words come alive! How can a poet make the dead seem beautiful again,… love a good mind boggle!!! Genius piece! A heavy piece
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Date: 12/26/2023 12:02:00 AM
Some stunningly powerful lines in this Ink - sure winner for the contest x
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